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| Sentiment's Turn by Mysterious Jedi | 9 Review(s) |
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| Anni | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 12/28/2004 |
| Ooops, sorry, I left a review before, didn't realize that the story was over. That's too bad that it is, but it was great, once again! =) Author Reply: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Maybe I'll write an epilogue of some sort someday, if inspiration strikes, but I really don't know. :) | |
| Anni | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 12/28/2004 |
| Very good! You really are very good at writing! This story is fun to read, and I hope you continue more soon! | |
| DAYNA | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 12/28/2004 |
| Wonderful story, Jedi! I really enjoyed it! I would like to see it 'fleshed out' a bit more. You have the basis for some very in-depth characters. You can give them more of a history, give us more insight into their thoughts/feelings and the like. Build on this. You're a great writer! :) Author Reply: Thanks! I think I'll be working more on one-shots for a while, much less pressure, but I may edit this someday and perhaps write some fillers or an epilogue of some sort. You never can tell :) | |
| DAYNA | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/28/2004 |
| wonderful, jedi! this is very interesting so far! I do have a helpful hint, however: King Elessar merely smiled at her astonishment. "It is said that Orcs are the descendants of elves ruined by evil. If darkness can make an orc an elf, I see no reason that light cannot turn one back again." I think you meant to say "darkness can make an ELF an ORC..." you put it the other way around. Or did I misread it. I am notorious for that, you know. keep up the good work! I like this story! Author Reply: Hmm... I guess I thought I had replied to this months ago, sorry. Anyways, thanks for commenting and pointing out my mistake. | |
| mirax | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 10/17/2004 |
| hey, this is an interesting story, i would like to read more of it. Anyway i would like to know arwen reaction, you haven't spoken about her and i don't think she will be more receptive than her brothers, after all her mother was attacked by orcs and had to left middle-earth, she never get the chance to said her goodbye 'cause she stayed and married to aragorn, no i don't think she will like this :-). Author Reply: Thank you for your comments, I'll see if I can write Arwen in somehow. | |
| MysteriousWays | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/13/2004 |
| I am really enjoying this story. I think I will have to pass it onto my sister since if goes along with an idea she had for a fan fiction. You have captured perfectly Sam's way of speaking which is in my view not easy. For that matter eachof your characters have their own clearly distinct voice. I am looking forward to reading your next post. Mys- Once in a while I get time to read. Author Reply: What's your sister's penname? | |
| hobbit_lass | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/12/2004 |
| Very Interesting! Cant wait to see what comes next- Author Reply: Thank you for taking the time to read and review. | |
| MysteriousWays | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/10/2003 |
| Most tantalizing, I am really looking forward to the next post. MysteriousWays Author Reply: Reviewed twice, impressive. Thank you. | |
| MysteriousWays | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/13/2003 |
| I am hooked!!! :) MysteriousWays | |