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Burden of a Healer  by Laikwalâssę 40 Review(s)
SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 10 on 11/11/2013
Ah! Elrond has triumphed. Glorfindel, after being suitably chastised, is healed to the extent he playfully teases little Legolas. Thornil is given due deference as Mirkwood's great healer and the horses are laden with antidote. A successful end to Elrond's mission and a sweet end to your story, Lai. Thank you for the pleasure.

Author Reply: It was a pleasure to write. A balanced mixture of adventure, dramatic and even it was time forlittle Legolas. Thank you so much for the much appreciated reviews. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 10 on 11/11/2013
It is good to see that success in the end, and now they will be able to successfully fight the poison when it is used next in the north. A well earned victory indeed! And loved Legolas's interaction with Glorfindel!

Author Reply: Elrond can now return home with a much lighter heart, I guess. Iīm glad you liked Glorfindel and Legolas but itīs so easy to write about "little" elflings, isnīt it. THank you so much for reviewing, Larner. I really appreciate it. Lai

curiouswombatReviewed Chapter: 10 on 11/10/2013
Ah - what a good ending. Thank you for this.

Author Reply: yes, a satisfying ending and Elrond can take his first breather. Thank YOU for reviewing. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 10 on 11/10/2013
And all's well that end's well. I'm sure Glorfindel learned his lesson also. *grin* Thanks for sharing, Lai.

Author Reply: never anger a healer, LOL! You are welcome, Fiondil. Thank YOU for reviewing. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 9 on 10/15/2013
Very tense and emotional chapter, Lai. And Glorfindel. "Just a scratch, Elrond. Don't sweat it." I'm sure he got as far as his room and then oollapsed and there's bound to be another crisis after Saeron is saved. LOL! Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.

Author Reply: what do you think of me, Fiondil? Elrond needs some relaxing, not another victim, or? He should have listened to his bad gut-feelings, right? LOL! Iīm glad the emotional chapter worked and I hope that I can deliver the last chapter soon. Thank you for an appreciated review. Lai

SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 9 on 10/15/2013
Glorfindel is badly injured. Saeron is dying. Thranduil and the Queen are just holding it together and Elrond is out of his Imladris comfort zone. Will the antidote work? Will Saeron fully recover? Oh! the stress! This is so good Lai.

Author Reply: I like comfort zone. LOL!And yes that are the great questions. Stress enough for all of them. Itīs high time for some relaxation, or? Thank you for a really arrpeciated review, Semmley. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 9 on 10/15/2013
I, too, would be taut with anxiety! Poor Saeron! I do hope he is strong enough to fight off the poison! At least they have this chance, as slight as it is. Now, to find if they need to use it also on Glorfindel!

Author Reply: they are much to concentrated on Saeron, arenīt they? I fear it will take some time before our elves can relax again. THank you for your review, Larner. I really appreciate it. Lai

demeter dReviewed Chapter: 9 on 10/14/2013
My, my! You start out quietly enough, with Elrond reaching out to the forest for news. Then the scouting party returns, and everything happens at once! It is somewhat of a relief that the Prince now has a fighting chance. But we are still left wondering whether he will make it. And has Glorfindel been spider bitten too? You are a mistress of suspense!

Author Reply: thatīs the lovliest praise I ever got. Thank you so much and to live true to my reputation the next chapter will hold again some suspense, even if it is sadly the last. Glorfindel spider-bitter? What a lovely thought....Tank you so much for an appreciated review, demeter. Lai

ellieReviewed Chapter: 9 on 10/14/2013
This is so scary for Thranduil and his wife. I hope it all works out!

Author Reply: yes, they have a lot to endure of late and additionally to worry that the new poison has now reached their realm. With the best healer of Arda there all should work out well, I hope. Thank you so much for reviewing, Ellie. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 8 on 10/6/2013
Ooh... a mini cliffhanger. You're not going to make things easy for anyone, are you Lai? LOL! Looking forward to seeing what happens next, especially with Glorfindel injured.

Author Reply: with Glorfindel injured he will not be of much help, yet at the next chapter it will be Elrondīs part to hurry at what my last line in the chapter indicated. And no, I will not make it easy for everyone, as always. LOL! Thank you for a much appreciated review, Fiondil. Lai

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