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Forging Hope  by Ellie 3 Review(s)
FiondilReviewed Chapter: 19 on 7/13/2014
Arafinwë and Eárendil are funny here in spite of the seriousness of the situation in which they (and everyone else) find themselves. Aicanáro was wise not to let Arafinwë near his forge, though, even though I suspect that Arafinwë sobered up real quickly when he realized who the smith was. And at least now Eärendil realizes that he's not alone in his grief for what is happening around them.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 19 on 7/5/2014
Oh, but these three do have such excellent reason to appreciate just how heinous this invasion is as kinsmen, no matter how distantly as seen by those threatening Aman. I rejoice that he has found his second son Aicanaro and has found him worthy. That Aule himself should train him is so appropriate! And Arafinwe has reason to be proud of both his peredhil children, if not his daughter's more distant descendants.

Author Reply: I thought it only fitting that none of these three should have to mourn this horrible travesty alone. Now that Arafinwe is not alone in his knowledge of what he has done, I think he will be a bit more at peace to have a kindred spirit at hand. Finding his son was a great blessing indeed. They both needed this.

Thank you for reading and reviewing! I appreciate it very much!

SiiwReviewed Chapter: 19 on 7/3/2014
I can't believe that this story doesn't have 20 reviews pr.chapter. It is simply one of the best stories I have read on this site. I got worried when this wasn't posted at the usual time!

Several of the last few chapters have been so heartbreaking that I simply didn't know what to say. I had to stop reading this at work, because it made me cry. This chapter, however, made me smile. I really like your Arafinwë. He has made a good character in your other stories, but here he really shines. I'll try to post a comment on every chapter later when the story is finished, when I just find the right words!

Author Reply: I am flattered by your compliments. Thank you!!! I was surprised that there are so few reviewers but that does seem to be the way of it nowadays in the fanfiction world. I am pleased to know that you are enjoying my story, even if it has been heartbreaking. This story was about six years in the making and has been a very difficult tale to tell. I look forward to hearing your comments on the different chapters when you are so inclined to put down a few words. Thank you so very much for letting me know you are enjoying this tale!

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