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Completion  by Garnet Took 6 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/4/2023
Good enough! Glad she admits her own faults and is willing to beg his pardon. Bless them both!

Author Reply: They've been through the worst and now, hopefully, there are only good things in they're future. Thanks for all the new encouragement.

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/19/2023
Oh, my!

I keep intending to come back to SoA and spend hours reading (and other hours writing and posting...), but I keep getting derailed by work and life. Still, I finished working at 2 a.m. (just now) and could not resist a peek - and here I find a treasure! Only recently, I was thinking about your Pippin and Diamond, and now, here they are on the first page at SoA, so conveniently inviting me to come again and read at my leisure.

I think I know what I'm going to do on my day off, a couple days from now...

Blessings and best wishes to you.
Lin

Author Reply: Thanks for the welcome back. I hope, if you got a chance to read it, you enjoyed revisiting what I have finished at least. I'm trying to get reacquainted with all the characters and see if they can tell me where in the heck we were going in the first place.:)

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/25/2014
I'm so glad to see that Diamond is coming around and realizing the mistakes she made. I look forward to seeing them become a happy and fulfilled family once more!

Pippin of course, is delighted and will be glad to forgive her and move on to a full reconciliation. There are a few, however, (like Merry and the King) who have known the truth of their relationship for a while. So she'll have more fences to mend than merely those with her husband! But I am sure that she'll face that hurdle with courage.

Author Reply: There was no way she could stay that unsympathetic for too long and deep down she loves him with all her heart. I'm glad she realized it before he'd totally resigned himself to a bleak future.

She's going to do just fine and he'll defend her to anyone, because that's just his nature.

Thanks for the review and some more fuel for the writing fire. :)

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/25/2014
Good to see the love finally being properly expressed.

Author Reply: Yes it is. They're going to come through this just fine and discover that they have a lot of love between themselves and to share. Thanks for reviewing.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/25/2014
This leaves me feeling nearly as happy as Diamond and Pippin. What a sweet, thoughtful scene.

Author Reply: Thanks, Shirebound. I just hope the rest of the story lives up to the beginning.

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/25/2014
Awwww.

I haven't read (as recommended) the earlier stories, not even the last chapter of the previous one (reading in stolen moments this morning), but you sprinkle enough hints here, I think I get the gist.

What a lovely sketch of both characters. I'm glad for them both. (Maybe I should say "for them all" for it includes the children as well.)

Author Reply: I'm glad that reading the other stories wasn't as important as I feared it would be. It had been six years between postings so I wasn't sure.

Thanks for the complements. I'm hoping that the rest of the story, which is looking to be rather long holds up to the beginning.

Thanks. for reviewing in your stolen reading moments.

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