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My name means hope  by Laikwalâssê 5 Review(s)
MarianelReviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/17/2014
Wheres Gandalf or maybe better Radagast when hes needed? I hope some Istari can show up for this and help Elladan and Elrohir somehow with Eldarion. I like Arwens fierceness, like a lioness, and I know that protective feeling. She is magnificent and Im sure she will be important as well as Estel in Eldarions healing poor child.Fantastic storytelling!

Author Reply: I have not considered the Istari until yet, but that´s an intersting concept. This way I have always pictured Arwen; gentle but also fierce. I like the picture of a lioness. I´m so glad you like my storytelling and thank you so much for your lovely review, Marianel. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/15/2014
Trepanning will help the child. I only hope that Elladan and Elrohir arrive in time!

Author Reply: it may help but who can do this? and the twins are far away......
Thanks for reviewing, Larner. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/14/2014
Now, they just need to get the twins to Minas Tirith in time to do the boy any good. Very intense, Lai.

Author Reply: yes, nothing more and nothing less but Imladris is far away from Minath Tirith, or? As always thank you so much for reviewing, Fiondil.

SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/13/2014
Of course! the twins! But .. Where are they? Will they come in time? Tension is mounting. Great chapter, Lai, please update soon.

Author Reply: the twins are miles and miles away and their time is running out. Arwen is knowing that too, or? I´m glad I can hold the tension high. LOL. Thank you so much for reviewing, Tina. Next update is one the way. Lai

EllieReviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/13/2014
This is very tense and sad. I feel sorry for the parents.

Author Reply: despite all their power Aragorn and Arwen seem helpless in the face of such a tragedy. Thank you for reviewing, Ellie. Lai

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