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Golden Lord of Gondolin  by Nieriel Raina 2 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/24/2015
Definitely the right sentiment for the moment! How wonderful it must have felt, knowing that now Morgoth's lieutenant was also defeated!

Author Reply: Indeed! Thanks for reading!

CelethReviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/24/2015
That was most beautiful!

I can almost imagine GLorfindel's emotions as he realized that they had finally defeated that evil they had been fighting for ages, from Master to servant.

"That day, they had not won. That day, there had been tears unnumbered. Yet, the cry felt right."

In so few simple words, you manage to juxtapose that uplifting hope, and heartbreaking defeat, of the Eldar in that long ago battle, with the victory of Middle Earth wrought thru the painful toil of two hoobits.

Thank you for a beautiful story. I'm so looking forward to that long story about Glorfindel.

Author Reply: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

I'm actually working on a shorter story with Glorfindel at the moment, but it feeds into where I'm going with the longer backstory. Thanks so much for reading!

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