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Ruin  by Laikwalâssê 6 Review(s)
EllieReviewed Chapter: 14 on 10/28/2015
Nicely done.

Author Reply: thank you so much. I´m glad you liked it, Ellie. Lai

galathilReviewed Chapter: 14 on 10/20/2015
Hi Laikwalasse The story is beautiful and sad. This is a wonderful tribute to Fiondil and to all who go over the sea. Thank you Galathil

Author Reply: thank you so much, Galadhil. Maybe we will all meet again on other shores. It´s a nice hope. Lai

MattReviewed Chapter: 14 on 10/20/2015
Too bad there couldn't be a happy ending but in some ways this story is better because you didn't give us one. Thanks for your hard work on this, I will keep an eye open for other stories with an elven focus from you.

Author Reply: there is a happy ending in some way. It´s high time for the Valar to intervene. Thank you so much for your lovely review. I´m glad you like my stories and will keep an eye on them. My focus will always be on elves. Lai

SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 14 on 10/18/2015
Finally! Glorfindel has realized Elvea will be waiting for him. Let's face it, the Valar owes that happy ending to him. All's well that ends well. Thank you for this story Lai, I've enjoyed it very much.

Author Reply: yes, the Valar have much to make right. Glorfindel deserves at least this small hope. I´m glad you liked my story, my friend. Thank you so much for your constant reviewing. You know how much appreciate it. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 14 on 10/17/2015
At least Glorfindel is finally healing indeed, and will not linger. The thought that the healed Elvea will be awaiting them with Celebrian is heartening. I'll admit I'd not thought of it.

And we all miss Fiondil!

Author Reply: the thought came to me with the last chapter and thrilled me. The only way to get Glorfindel back and lure him to the blessed lands. Fiondil suggested the name for Elvea. What would I give for a review of him....thanks for reviewing, Larner. I really appreciate it. Lai

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 14 on 10/17/2015
something that is lost on these shores may be found again on other shores.

I hope this is true, not only for our beloved Elves. What a marvelous tale, and a lovely, poignant gift for Fiondil who, also, may be waiting on distant shores.

Author Reply: exactly my thoughts, shirebound. Thank you so much for your lovely reviews and following my story. Lai

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