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A Founding Member  by Larner 4 Review(s)
TariReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/2/2018
How vicious and mean Lotho is. He'll get his come uppins some day.

TariReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/20/2015
Looks like Lotho has found the perfect partner in crime.

Author Reply: That he has! Heh! Thanks, Tari.

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/18/2015
people were likely to accept its inclusion as typical Sackville-Baggins dismay that they weren’t likely to ever dwell in Bag End themselves

What a perfidious plan! At first I had my doubts, but now I think that it really will work that way.

It seems that Lotho found a fellow that day. What they have in common is the hate for Frodo Baggins.

Author Reply: Oh, yes, Lotho has found a fellow indeed after all this time, with their joint hatred for Frodo bringing them together, and their desire to jointly put one over on the whole Shire keeping them in collusion together.

Glad you can see how this idea that the SBs were only expressing frustration would in the end work to fulfill Lotho's designs! Thanks so, Andrea!

someoneReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/18/2015
Lotho and Timono's personality shows clearly in this chapter. They don't seem to care if they bankrupt other hobbits, as long as they show their own cleverness and get their revenge. It really is clever to notice the problems in the contracts and realize how Frodo will one day leave the Shire. I just wish they would have put their brains to better use. And all this planning while Timono's father is dying.

I'm a little confused as this chapter seems to have happened earlier than the previous one, unless the previous was the prologue and this starts the story.

Author Reply: Yes, this one is actually set prior to the previous chapter, and the previous chapter was intended to be the prologue: but numbering on other sites but this doesn't account for prologues, too, so I'd thought to try to keep numbering consistent in all archives, but will amend this one.

Lotho does know his detested cousin better than many others do, and both he and Timono indeed intend to get their revenge on everyone they feel has ever slighted them. I doubt many will truly mourn the passing of Tiercel Bracegirdle, but he certainly didn't deserve to have his son planning such perfidy on that day of all days, did he?

Thanks so for your comments!

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