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The Eagle on the Ramparts  by Canafinwe 259 Review(s)
someoneReviewed Chapter: 25 on 11/2/2017
I hope that we are going to see more of Minardil and Míriel in the future!

Things seem to be getting better, as Jamon has finally had some instructions (and even better, from someone who knows how to teach well) and has found some confidence, Minardil may have started to leave the fate of his company on the battlefield to the past and found more pleasant things to think about, and Thorongil has an important mission in training green recruits up to his standard. It was a good idea to give Thorongil some doubts as to his usefulness in the city, as it is realistic that even he wouldn’t always be patient in doing his duty. It will be interesting to see how the people will react to the final duels! At least it will give everyone something new to talk about, as Minardil thought it would - and most likely annoy Denethor even more.

LisaGReviewed Chapter: 25 on 10/15/2017
This is such a wonderful, rich story! I sincerely hope it will eventually be completed...it would be a tragedy if not.

Kate Reviewed Chapter: 25 on 8/8/2017
Absolutely delighted to see another chapter. Thank you for posting.
I'm really enjoying how each of Thorongil's skills are slowly being discovered and used, and all with humility from him.

I couldn't help but feel a chill when Aragorn is looking east and thinking of the terror that dwells there.




LarnerReviewed Chapter: 25 on 8/2/2017
Ah, finally time to savor this tale!

I rejoice that Thorongil thought to go before the magistrate so as to better help Jamon, and it appears that Minardil has managed to find a beacon of his own to lead him to physical and emotional fulfillment in his attempts to support Jamon's own marriage.

At least Denethor knows now how deeply he is feared by the enemy, which must be both reassuring and capable of raising anxiety.

Good enough!

Reviewed Chapter: 25 on 7/31/2017
Canafinwe, I was thrilled to see a continuation of this fabulous story. I was even happier to see you writing again. I hope your pleasure in writing equals my pleasure in reading your words. So very glad to see you are back. Best wishes.

RowanfairReviewed Chapter: 25 on 7/30/2017
Thank you so much! I kept checking every other day lately in hope for a new chapter... vibrations must have reached you finally! ☺

I enjoyed Minardils reaction to the „wrong sister“ very much. I love these intertwining little sidesteps of yours. Looking forward to its unfolding.
Jamon on the other hand appears a little to bold in his way to deliver unexpected success to his Captain General. As proud as he finally may be to have gained that knowledge after all.

Anyway – can´t wait to read more…

obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 25 on 7/30/2017
Seems like Thorongil's teachings to Jarmon were successful. But Denethor needs to be more careful in what he asks. If the prisoner does not talk or tells fairy tales, he will blame Jarmon and that is patently wrong.

KathReviewed Chapter: 25 on 7/30/2017
So good to have another chapter, Canfinwe. Was worried that you had had to give up Thorongil!
Hope Minardil will find love and poor Jamon is released soon!
Many thanks x

TariReviewed Chapter: 24 on 4/10/2017
I have finished reading all the chapters posted. Are you going to finish this story?

TariReviewed Chapter: 23 on 4/4/2017
I have one last posted chapter to read. I do hope you will finish this story. It is so good that I must find out how it plays out. Thank you.

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