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| Bait by Legorfilinde | 3 Review(s) |
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| Marianel | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 10/27/2015 |
| Your stories are among the best I have read in fanfiction and so different twists from others. I was so fascinated with your werewolfstory Bitten of Aragorn, the vampirelike Legolas in Bait and the dark nameless malice It in the story Hidden. I think the Hidden was my favoriter though I like all of your "monster" stories:That was a creepy story indeed and so Wellwritten.This is the kind of stories I would read to older children and teenagers at a sleepover or a Halloween party. Im impressed with your sence for details and descriptions of the characters and places. I can really see them before me.I will gladly read your other stories too. Im sorry if I didnt review these stories separately but I was too engrossed in your stories to stop and review😁😆.Thank you for the entertainment for hours! | |
| Ana | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 12/24/2004 |
| Hi Lef: (Silly me, I finally found were to post a review!) Many compliments on your ability and understanding of the characters. You are able to handle many narrative threads at once and not rush the development. Your OFC is such a well drawn baddie, love to hate her and get angst-y over her knowledge of elvish vulnerability. Action build up works in stages... enjoy how you let us see things from different POV and get the internal messages w/o lots of explanation. Other characters are also easily belived and well portrayed. Poor Leggy is tested to the max, he is not invulnerable super elf, and we love him the more for it. You do have a gift for putting us ( and him) in a painful place and finding the resolution with grace. Well done!!! Thanks again for sharing, and now I can check out your other wonderful fics! Blessings, ANA | |
| Aloysius | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 6/6/2004 |
| You really like to put Legolas through the wringer, don't you? :o) Great atmosphere, clever plot, good pace, very exciting - and Thuringwethil is a brilliant creation. Alo | |