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Burgundy Ink  by TolkienScribe 5 Review(s)
Mysterious JediReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 3/18/2016
This is a rather sad story, but I'm glad Maedhros won Elros's love. The sons of FŽanor did terrible things, but they suffered terrible things also.

ConquistadoraReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 2/28/2016
Loved the inner conflict as Maedhros must admit to himself that he has become rather frightening. Very melancholy.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 2/18/2016
A good means of attracting the attention of the child, who after all had been through a traumatic experience, and of winning his acceptance, perhaps even his love.

Thank you!

Author Reply: That's precisely what I wanted to play with the scene. Thank you for your kind review!

EllieReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 2/18/2016
I liked this very much, seeing Maedhros "giving in" and making the picture for the little twin I can believe that is was Elros, too, for he became the king who moved his people to a new land and start over with nothing. I suspect that he had little adventures as a child since that last venture of his was such a big one.

Thanks for sharing!

Author Reply: Your welcome! And thank you for your review! :)

AranadhelReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 2/18/2016
Love this piece! to be honest I was actually guessing it to be Elrond instead of Elros that intruded upon Maedhros' room.

More please :)

Author Reply: I did consider Elrond for a moment, but poor Elros barely gets the spotlight!

And I intend to! ;)

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