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A love denied  by LaikwalÔssŕ 14 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 9 on 2/4/2017
We may not be certain of the identity of the child's father, but we do know he will be loved.

Author Reply: Elisa only knows and he will be loved anyway. Thank you so much for following my story, Larner. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 8 on 2/4/2017
Too drunk to accept that it was Elisa and not Celebrian who sought to comfort him. Alas!

Author Reply: maybe the alcohol is partly to blame but the problem lies deeper. Thanks for your interest, Larner. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 7 on 2/4/2017
Was wondering when the breakdown would come....

Author Reply: yes, it was overdue...Thanks for the Review. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/4/2017
It would appear to many others that Elrond might be seeking to hide from the loss of his wife by devoting himself to this unknown mortal woman and thus might be seeking to replace Celebrian with his patient, so I can appreciate why Arwen feels the way she does. But where he sees the woman as a needed distraction who needs his care, others see more than there is, it appears.

Lack of communication does do damage.

Author Reply: Elrond is not only lying to himself. Arwen┤s reaction is understandable, yet maybe some understanding would have done some good to Elrond too. Thanks so much for reviewing, Larner. Lai

SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/5/2016
It will be interesting to learn just how Elrond reacts to the news that Arwen intends to leave Imladris with Galadriel and Celeborn.

Author Reply: that will be very interesting indeed and not to forget the talk between Galadriel and her son-in-law. LOL! Thank you so much for your review, Tina. It means a lot to me. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 5 on 9/25/2016
It is little wonder she wishes to put distance between herself and the poor emotional health to be found here.

Author Reply: indeed, but is her father even aware of that? Thanks for reviewing, Larner. Lai

SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 4 on 7/22/2016
Life hasn't been kind to Elrond and now he simply is not thinking of anyone's pain but his own. I hope he works through his grief soon Lai, the family are'nt happy either.

Author Reply: everyone is looking at him for guidence, but he┤s the one needing guidence right now. He has no means to vent his grief. Thank you so much for reviewing, Tina. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 7/15/2016
Good reason to be concerned for Elrond's behavior. Quite the fight! I'm glad Erestor was wise enough to see Elrond disarmed first. And Elladan was wise to listen to the older Elf.

Author Reply: to follow Erestor┤s advice is ever wise, in every matter. LOL. Elrond has to come to terms soon, he has three children in dire need of a caring father. Thank you so much for reviewing, Larner. Lai

TMI FairyReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/6/2016
Arwen needing he mother? At 2200?

Author Reply: yes, that┤s what she would need right now, but sadly it cannot be. Thanks for reviewing. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 7/1/2016
Poor Elrond--besieged on every side, it seems. May he find redemption in helping this unknown woman.

Author Reply: yes, but will it lift spirits? I doubt this....
THank you for your much appreciated review, Larner. Lai

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