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|As Soft As Steel by TolkienScribe||3 Review(s)|
|Esteldė Tincalima||Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/24/2017|
|I love this first chapter and I hope that more are to follow! :) I particularly admire your portrayal of canon characters, especially Fėanįro. He's a complex one, but one of my favorites. Excellent beginning.|
I'm just gonna leave a quick nitpick, since my beta side is hard to silence. When you have someone speaking and their dialogue is followed by a dialogue tag, it should look like this:
"I am speaking," he said.
Note the comma before the quotation marksit's not a period. :) I noticed you did this multiple times in the chapter. It's minor, but it would be fantastic if you could make sure it's right and all.
|Larner||Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/18/2016|
|A very likely beginning to the friendship we know came to bind them.|
|Elentarri||Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/18/2016|
|This is good, very good. More please.|