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| Smoke & Mirrors by Lialathuveril | 8 Review(s) |
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| whitewave | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 8/24/2016 |
| Felt so sorry for both Eomer and Dordes in this chapter, wish Eomer didn't have toleave but I think this time apart will also help them evaluate their feelings for each other. Author Reply: Yes, absence might make both of them take a look at their feelings and realise what they are. | |
| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 8/4/2016 |
| Poor Eomer, I hope the battle goes better fpr him than this last day at home. Author Reply: He probably finds coping with battle easier than domestic problems, so hopefully it will! | |
| whitewave | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 7/18/2016 |
| Sorry for the late review, I enjoyed this one as well and because of this chapter, I feel all the more excited to read what will happen when they meet in person again. Author Reply: No need to apologise! They won't meet for another chapter however, although Eomer will get news from Lothiriel soon. Thanks for reviewing! | |
| obsidianj | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 7/16/2016 |
| Oh, Eomer, bad timing is your name. He never can get anything right. Lothiriel's reaction was strange. But I will have to wait for the story to unfold before Lothiriel hopefully will give the answer to that riddle. Author Reply: Well, poor Eomer is bumbling about in the smoke and mirrors without proper directions, so you can't really blame him. He's trying his best ;-) All will be revealed eventually though. | |
| Sitaray | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 7/13/2016 |
| Love this story...please update soon!!! Author Reply: Thank you! I hope to be more regular with updating in the future, but Real Life keeps me on my toes. | |
| curiouswombat | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 7/12/2016 |
| Oh poor Éomer - how very embarrassing, to be found in bed with your wife in a position that indicates you have a very normal approach to having to leave her... :) I wonder if he is right about her fear it was to be a 'token to remember me by' - and like him I wonder, if so, who gave her the last one? Author Reply: Yes, poor Eomer! Perhaps I should have called this story 'Bad Timing' ;-D And the token will be explained eventually, but of course not just yet. I still intend to have a little more fun with him! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 7/11/2016 |
| She, too, must learn to relax and appreciate his foibles just as he needs to learn about her. At least he's learning to be honest with her and to admit he is attracted by her. I wonder what brought about this flight reaction, too. Author Reply: Yes, he's taken a step towards her - and by admitting to her that he finds her attractive, he's also admitting as much to himself. As for Lothiriel's reaction, he will find out eventually what caused it. | |
| whitewave | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 7/11/2016 |
| Oh gosh, I wish the battle will be finished soon so they can talk again. Sigh. Thanks for another good chapter. Author Reply: It won't be that quick - but luckily there are other forms of communication than talking. Thanks for reviewing! | |