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On the knifes edge  by Laikwalss 3 Review(s)
demeter dReviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/30/2017
Ah, ha, let's see now. Elrond had to shut Elrohir's mother off from his own bond, as he was rather busy saving their son! But I am sure the Mommy has her own bond with her children, as well. Since Elrond seemed to be having difficulty, if I were her I would have gathered up my own contingent of guards and come after! Now she and some of those guards can take that one home, while Ada and his people go after the others. I agree, tho. I hope Glorfindel has not drained himself too badly!

Author Reply: of course she has her own bond which she will use. To come after her husband will not improve Elronds mood, huh? But a very good idea and stuff for more potential of catastrophes, right? Thank you so uch for your lovely review, demeter d. Lai

EllieReviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/27/2017
Another evil cliffhanger! Poor Elrohir with his terrible injuries! I am amazed at what Glorfindel seems to have done. Ihope he did not spend too much energy in the venture to save Elrohir. I hope help is coming and not more hurt!

Author Reply: where is the fun without a cliffie? Poor Elrohir indeed, but now hes in the best of hands and grandma will do all to make him better, Im sure. Never underestimate the elves of old; they rerely show their power, but when, its amazing. You are right, Glorfindel should have more economized his strenght. Thank you so much for your review, Ellie. I really appreciate it. Lai

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/27/2017
Whew, one rescued at least! What an exciting chapter. Glorfindel's power extends far from his physical body, I see.

I really liked this part: The tree sensing the childs danger lowered its lowest branch allowing him to grab it.

Author Reply: one son safe, the other still out there - poor Elrond! Glorfindel is always good for a surprise even Elrond does not expect. I always liked the close connection of the elves to nature - Elrohir is no wood elf but an elf nonetheless. Im so glad I could fascinate you with my chapter, shirebound. Thsnk you for a most appreciated review, Lai

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