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On the knife’s edge  by Laikwalâssę 3 Review(s)
elizaReviewed Chapter: 7 on 6/5/2017
Yea!! the Calvary has arrived. Always enjoy seeing Celeborn, he always seems like a port of calm during a storm. Now as for Galadriel, lol maybe because I have "nosey mother in law" syndrome, Elrond should have told her to "stuff" it. How is it her job to calm her daughter down or to reprimand anyone? this is a married couple fight, I bet she'd skewer anyone who dared to comment on her and Celeborn's relationship.

loving this story Laikwalasse. can't wait for the next chapter

Author Reply: You are right, Celeborn is the right choice to bring some calm in the heated atmosphere. I think we all have "nosey mother in law" syndrom. LOL! But Galadriel is Galadriel, right? And her daughter takes 100% after her as you will see in the next chapter. Elrond will have to make clear his stand; but I have faith in him. His problems with his wife is not her concern. I´m glad you love this story and for every of your reviews. Thank you. Lai

demeter dReviewed Chapter: 7 on 6/4/2017
Well, met, Celeborn, indeed. Celeborn The Wise has come prepared. And again, our Balrog Slayer has taken the advice to heart, and given aid without his body leaving the ledge. His first appearance to save Elrohir from the orcs reminded me of the scene in "Fellowship" at the Ford of Bruinen. Frodo sees a figure of blazing light, frightening the wraiths into the river. Gandalf later tells him he has seen Glorfindel with the glory he possesses in the Undying Lands. I also like the image of Galadriel's "traveling clothes". Somehow I can not imagine her in anything but immaculate white, no matter what she is doing!

Author Reply: Elrond has dire need of the reinforcement. I´m glad you liked the scene of Glorfindel helping Elrohir but I haven´t thought of the scene at the "Fellowship", but you are right that´s kind of similar. I could not resist to describe Galadriel in white - anything other is unthinkable. LOL. Thank you so much for your review, demeter d. I really appreciate it. Lai

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 7 on 6/3/2017
Hooray, more cavalry has arrived! Awww, one more glimpse of Asfaloth galloping in the sunshine.

Author Reply: are you sure that the rider´s is help they hope for? Asfaloth will be in our memories forever. Thank you for your lovely review, shirebound. Lai

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