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On the knife’s edge  by Laikwalāssź 3 Review(s)
elizaReviewed Chapter: 10 on 7/4/2017
lol, boy the youngin's (Elrond and Celebrian) are having a rough day aren't they.
just goes to show you that no matter how old we get some times our parents still need to set us straight.

Great story Lai, really enjoying the interactions between the entire family.

Author Reply: yes, they have I dread when Elrond learns that Celebrķan is at the camp and when she is meeting her husband - huh, much trouble ahead. Wise parents are always needed, regardless the age and race. I“m glad you like my family interactions. It“s great fun to write. Thank you so much for a most appreciated review, eliza. Lai

KathReviewed Chapter: 10 on 7/4/2017
Just to say how much I am enjoying this story. Lovely to read fiction about the twins when they were young. Great tension between the adult relatives! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Thank you!

Author Reply: I“m happy you are enjoying my story. Elrond and the twins are my favourites and writing about elflings is additional fun when strong emotions are involved. The next chapter is already on the way. Enjoy! Lai

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 10 on 7/3/2017
Galadriel is wonderfully wise and strong. Celebrian definitely needs tough love right now so she can help, not harm, everyone's concentration and tasks.

Author Reply: Elrond will need every support he can get and his wife would do good to follow her mother“s advice. Her rejecting attitude is not helping matters. Thanks for a most appreciated review, shirebound. Lai

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