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On the knife’s edge  by Laikwalâssę 3 Review(s)
elizaReviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/26/2017
Oy Vey, talk about having a bad day. Wife mad at you, best friend angry and paralyzed and kids injured and meddling in-laws. lol. great chapter Lai, great chapter. One thing that was really interesting was how even in the midst of all "heck" breaking loose, Elrond still managed to find a light moment with Tinar.

can't wait to see how this plays out.

Author Reply: Elrond has really much on his plate and his wife would do good to support him. Even Elrond has his limits and they would do all good to remember that. I fear how this will play out. LOL! Thank you so much for your lovely review, eliza. Lai

SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/26/2017
Lai, I am enjoying this story very much. You have woven the direct influence of the Valar, dicey rescues, explosive family dynamics, Glorfindel's paralysis and glory, even the Eagles play their part, into a well written whole. Celebrian's bond with the twins has her sick with worry, no wonder she is angry when Elrond shuts her out; it is good he is having doubts about the matter. Love that bit about "the Lorien lot." BTW will Asfaloth be resurrected by the Valar?

Author Reply: thank you so much for your appreciation. It means a lot to me. I´m always aiming at showing emotion as real as possible and obviously I habe done something righ, but there is good stuff to work with, eh? I have other plans with Asfaloth but something that will maked Glorfindel hopefully also happy in the end. Love and thanks for reviewing, Tina. Lai

EllieReviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/25/2017
Poor Elrond! Everyone is after him for something! I hope he gets a break eventually, but I bet it takes a long while.

Author Reply: I fear you are right, Ellie. There will be a long way home and many perils along the way. Elrond will need a real long holiday after all this. Thanks for your lovely review. Lai

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