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On the knife’s edge  by Laikwalāssź 4 Review(s)
shireboundReviewed Chapter: 15 on 8/30/2017
I'm finally able to catch up with your story now that my cross-country move is complete. What a difficult time for this family! And poor Glorfindel. I hope he's able to find healing.

Author Reply: Glorfindel is not to envy, but Elrond neither. Both could need a bit of mind-relaxing. Celebrķan is not helping matters. Indeed a difficult time right now. Thank you so much for still reading my story and reviewing, shirebound. Lai

SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 15 on 8/27/2017
Elrond and Celebrian seem to be reconciled, but for how long? She seems to have transferred her anger to Glorfindel - more angst. Lai, how will Elrond resolve this little dilemma?

Author Reply: Elrond will not appreciate what Celebrian had done and the clashing will come very soon. What options does he have anyway? Celebrķan has to put in place. Her behavior is not acceptable. I“m sorry for poor Elrond. He would need a shoulder right now. Thanks for reviewing, my friend. Lai

SilkleafReviewed Chapter: 15 on 8/26/2017
Ouch! Just when Elrond was glad to be home, looks like stuff is still cooking under the surface! Lots of misunderstandings, and poor Glorfindel meant well at the start of this! I guess Elrond feels like shipping all of them to Valinor! ;D Looking forward to more!

Author Reply: you are right. The volcano is ready to erupt. Either he shipps all to Valinor or goes himself. LOL! Even Elrond has his limits and all would do good to remember that from time to time or they will find out the hard way. Thank you so much for reviewing. Lai

elizaReviewed Chapter: 15 on 8/24/2017
Wow! Ok, I'm firmly on Team Elrond here. just seems like the hits keep coming. Interesting to see Celebrian reaction to this accident and the aftermath. I like your portrayal of their relationship though, lol I always wondered if Elven couples experience the usual stresses of child rearing.

Elrond is in a difficult position here, talk about having to tread carefully. Can't wait to see his next move.

Author Reply: why should elven couples not quarrel from time to time, I wondered and Celebrian isn“t easy I guess. Elrond isn“t to envy with all the stress on his back - traumatisized children, many injured and of course Glorfindel and on topp an angry wife - not easy. I“m glad you like the family drama I“m weaving. Next chapter is on the way. Thank you so much for a most appreciated review, eliza. Lai

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