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On the knife’s edge  by Laikwalāssź 4 Review(s)
SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/14/2017
Oh! Celebrian is such a trial. She has successfully alienated just about everyone. I am not surprised she is beset by nightmares; just what is needed to bring her to her senses! I'm really looking forward to the next update Lai.

Author Reply: a nightmare is exactly what she needs now, otherwise Elrond will throw a celebration when she finally sails. LOL! Be asured the dream will help! Thank you so much for a most appreciated review, my friend. Lai

SilkleafReviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/5/2017
It sort of reminded me of "It's a wonderful life" also, I wonder if somehow Galadriel isn't behind this ;D I know Celebrian's being difficult but I feel for her. Hope she wakes up soon!


Author Reply: it“s not Galadriel, but an other powerful being. She will wake up in the truest sense of the word. Thank you for a most appreciated review, Silkleaf. Lai

elizaReviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/5/2017
ah-ha,
let's file this under "be careful what you ask for". It also reminds me of one of my favorite holiday movies, lol it's a wonderful life.

Celebrian makes me sad in a way, she seems to be an example of a mom who is so terrified of something happening to her kids that she tries to hold on super tight, only to find out that not only does that not work but it usually ends up pushing the very people you're trying to protect away much quicker.

Here's hoping her little dream helps her see the forest for the trees before she loses every thing.

Author Reply: exactly, you have to let go when you want someone to come back. Celebrķan has to make up for her behaviour especially with her oldest. I can only say: be careful what you ask for - LOL! Thank you so much for reviewing, eliza. Lai

ElentarriReviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/5/2017
Celebrian is a bitch! At this rate Elrond is going to be ecstatic and throw a celebration when she finally sails.

Author Reply: wow, my thoughts also at first, I do not overly like her, but I at least try to understand her motivations, even if I“m not very sucessful-LOL! Elrond deserves better. Love you review, Elentarri, thank you so much. Lai

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