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On the knife’s edge  by Laikwalâssę 2 Review(s)
SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 19 on 10/14/2017
Ah! At last! Glorfindel had been getting the rough end of the pineapple for far too long. Unselfish love for others cured him, his reward an adorable reborn Asfaloth .. A perfect conclusion to an enjoyable story Lai.

Author Reply: I could not let our dear elf hanging like that and thought of a suitable healing and reward. I thought on a beautiful foal - a son of Asfaloth but my beta reader had the wonderful idea of Asfaloth reborn. Yeah, he deserves it all. The story was much fun to write. I´m glad you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you so much for following and reviewing. Lai

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 19 on 10/6/2017
After a brief hesitation, it walked into the elf´s arms and placed his head on the warrior´s forearm. Glorfindel carefully enveloped the tiny animal in a gentle hug tears in his eyes. He stroked the fluffy fur and felt the foal already relaxing against him.

*melts* Oh yay, a happy ending! I have a big grin on my face now. :)

Author Reply: I could not let our dear Glorfi hanging. I´m glad you liked the ending, shirebound. Thank you so much for following my story and reviewing. I really appreciate it. Lai

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