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Tempest: Modern Age  by TolkienScribe 2 Review(s)
Gray DayReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/11/2017
The use of Thranduil's 'human' name seems a bit haphazard; for at least four paragraphs I thought Lee was a separate character. I might just be missing something no one else did, but it was confusing.

Aside from that, this is always a compelling premise, and you have executed it well thus far. (I am also admittedly biased toward authors who leave Legolas's mother alive, but that's a different story.)


Farewell!

NoorReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/19/2017
Intriguing first chapter. Leaves me wishing for more so that's always a good sign. I haven't read your other story so these are "fresh eyes". Thank you and keep writing.

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