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Serving Gondor  by Larner 6 Review(s)
MattReviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/16/2017
Interesting chapter. One wonders if the lords who think a bit too highly of themselves ever would conspire against Aragorn for his punishments for their hedonism. thanks for an interesting chapter, looking forward to the next installment.

aiwendilReviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/14/2017
This is so enjoyable to read, and I appreciate your attention to detail in things like the times the housekeeper lights the boilers. I particularly liked the idea of Arwen endowing a house of rest -- it seems a fitting tribute to Elrond and Rivendell. At the same time, it's hard to escape the thought that this is a highly idealized picture of life under Elessar.

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/13/2017
You made me feel as if I were in Minas Tirith. Poor Andreth to lose her children to a fever.

UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/13/2017
Larner, I always enjoy your stories. There are many I have read repeatedly. I was thrilled with a story of Minas Anor early in Aragorn's reign. Thank you so much

KathyGReviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/13/2017
Andred is certainly fortunate to have met the King and Queen!

One question. Aragorn referred to Pippin by his full legal name as well as his nickname, but he referred to the other three hobbits only by their nicknames. Is it because Pippin was a Guard of the Citadel?

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/13/2017
It is great to see the monument through different eyes and hear the King's loving recitation of their deeds. And Ruvemir is going to appear? Hooray! I think he is my favourite of your OC characters.
You appear to be getting me back into the habit of reviewing so thank you for that too. Also, many thanks for your email and prayers.

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