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World of Difference  by Lady Bluejay 5 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/15/2017
Aha! A second love fr\or Imrahil, then? A novel idea! Hope to see it come true!

Author Reply: Well he's not too old to have a little fun. Thanks for taking the time to review.LBJ

UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/14/2017
Getting interesting. I like your work. Thank you.

Author Reply: Thank you for reading and reviewing.

MattReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/14/2017
Really interesting chapter. One thing I would encourage you to do is to think through Sarah's physicality. IE if she's truly Eowyn's size, she would probably not be totally overborn by the Rohirim or Imrahil's people. However if she is Eowyn's size in body but not in height, this would impact how she interacts with both on physical and psychological levels. Is she curvy (thereby needing more support up top), or slender with fewer curves? Back in the day, handling this via radically different ways to set up clothing etc, was actually something of a serious issue for women as you doubtless already know but haven't really dealt with yet here. Very curious to see where you take this and thanks loads for your hard work on it.

Author Reply: You may be right, but this was only ever thought to be a little fun piece to give pleasure to me and anyone who read. My other stories are usually more crafted. Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ

InglorReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/10/2017
And that, Ladies and Gentlemen, is how you write a cliffhanger.

I like how you have her vaguely aware of the characters and the story, setting her apart (again) from the normal GFIME. And how you have given a logical reason for her to be inserted her into the company of "The Characters" lets us slide past the suspension of reality just a bit easier.

As usual, your little details are what makes this such a cool drink of water in the desert.

Oh, and... Imrahil!?

This is going to be soooooo much fun!

Author Reply: I hope it is fun - that is the intention. And I have fallen for Imrahil lately - as I get older I imagine. LBJ

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/10/2017
It's good to see Sara making herself at home.

Author Reply: But will she stay or will she go? LoL. Thanks for reviewing. LBJ

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