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Flight of the Dunedain  by Halrohir Haladanion 19 Review(s)
sReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 2/1/2018
Just wonderful!. I really hope there are many more tales of Halrohir and Morindal yet to come. Now that Aragorn is King, the Dunedan need a hero that moves among them and inspires them, for the world is changing.
Thank you for a marvelous story.

Author Reply: Thank you, for reading this tale all the way to the end. And you're right, the new kingdom needs its heroes, in the North as well as the South. Our Halrohir will have many adventures to come!

Sue CookeReviewed Chapter: 19 on 1/29/2018
Again and again - SO exciting. I hope you are going to write some other stories too, not just finish this one. You have a wonderful gift of drawing your readers into the action; putting us THERE, sword in hand. Soon it will be time for some in depth character development. I , as they, am looking forward to Rivendell.

MattReviewed Chapter: 19 on 1/28/2018
Nice job on these two chapters. The battle is well described as is the after-action debriefing. Curious to see what happens next and about these two elven presences that reach out to Halrohir. Thanks for your hard work on this, looking forward to future installments.

MattReviewed Chapter: 17 on 1/24/2018
Nicely done. The struggle between a sense of joy at increased safety and the awareness of the need for continuing vigilance is very well drawn. Thanks for your hard work on this, lookin gforward to the next installment.

Sue CookeReviewed Chapter: 16 on 1/20/2018
MORE MORE MORE more more m o r e m o r e zzzzzzsnurf

MattReviewed Chapter: 16 on 1/19/2018
Really nice chapter. Like the increased length a lot. Curious to see what happens next. Thanks for your hard work on this.

MattReviewed Chapter: 15 on 1/15/2018
Nice job on this chapter. I like the greater length and also the sense of .... something wicked this way comes that it carries with it. A nice cliffhanger. Looking forward to future installments.

AranadhelReviewed Chapter: 15 on 1/14/2018
Le hannon!

I couldn't believe it when say the title and I knew that the Elves of Rivendell will be in this chapter!

Yeah to Calembeg the Noldo and I'm assuming Dorwin is a Sinda or Silvan elf since he has golden hair and speaks not the Common Tongue :P

Can't wait for more Elves!


Sue CookeReviewed Chapter: 14 on 1/13/2018
Oooo...spooky. Halrohir is a nascent hero. I hope he comes to no harm. You have completely hooked me with this story. I check every day for a new chapter and I have not been disappointed yet!

Author Reply: Thank you so much for the review!

Next chapter, coming right up!

MattReviewed Chapter: 13 on 1/12/2018
Two more great chapters. Liked the scouting procedures and also the ongoing conversation about how and when to proceed. Looking forward to future installments and thankful for your hard work on these.

Author Reply: Thank you again for the review!

There are more suspense and action scenes coming...

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