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Flight of the Dunedain  by Halrohir Haladanion 2 Review(s)
Sue CookeReviewed Chapter: 19 on 1/29/2018
Again and again - SO exciting. I hope you are going to write some other stories too, not just finish this one. You have a wonderful gift of drawing your readers into the action; putting us THERE, sword in hand. Soon it will be time for some in depth character development. I , as they, am looking forward to Rivendell.

MattReviewed Chapter: 19 on 1/28/2018
Nice job on these two chapters. The battle is well described as is the after-action debriefing. Curious to see what happens next and about these two elven presences that reach out to Halrohir. Thanks for your hard work on this, looking forward to future installments.

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