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The Blue Wizard's Path  by aiwendil 4 Review(s)
eriolReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/28/2018
You bring to life the characters of the less written-about Wizards very well. With a short conversation like this one, you sketched Ramestano masterly, and the other characters in the story too. With a phrase like “but then he smiled, as sudden as a summer downpour”, I could feel this boy’s nature – direct, fresh, brave. And of course, I love your sentiments. As Shirebound has pointed out, “those who soar high above others are liable to forget that those on the ground share hopes and dreams in equal measure” and “If you see a great power, a shining light, in me, then you see your own reflection” is spot on. Very well-written. I enjoyed it.

Dells2TowersReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/19/2018
Well written!

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/22/2018
This deserves far more than one encouraging review. A great conversation. There is far too little written about the fate and purpose of the Blue Wizards.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/20/2018
...Those who soar high above others are liable to forget that those on the ground share hopes and dreams in equal measure.

...If you see a great power, a shining light, in me, then you see your own reflection.

Beautifully written, and I enjoyed this conversation very much. It's easy to understand, through your tale, why the missing wizards may have chosen hidden duties.

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