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The Cries of the West  by PSW 5 Review(s)
Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/16/2018
Great little story about Pippin in fierce battle; finding his raison d'etre amidst the chaos and danger. He's my favorite hobbit in LOTR, and it's fun to see him growing up and cutting loose at the same time.

Author Reply: Than you! Growing up and cutting loose ó I like it. :-) Thx so much for your comments!

periantariReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/15/2018
that was beautiful! I love how you used Pippin's point of view and i'm glad that he wants to represent the Shirefolk in this last stand. Great charactertization, description and i love how you also incorporated battle cries of different languages between the Middle-earth races.

Author Reply: Thank you! I had fun trying to look the languages up and get them figured out ó its one of the fun things about writing fanfic, the research bit ... :-) Thanks so much for your comments!

julesReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/13/2018
Oh! This is beautiful and heart-rending at the same time. Brave, brave Pippin has indeed grown on this Quest.
Itís lovely to see more from you, thanks for sharing it.

Author Reply: Yes, he definitely has grown ó in body, mind, and spirit. Iím so glad you enjoyed it, thx so much for your comments!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/12/2018
This is absolutely wonderful from beginning to end.

Author Reply: Iím so glad you liked it. :-) Thx so much for commenting!

Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/12/2018
Wonderful! What a stirring look at Pippin's thoughts during that last battle. When he looked around at his companions, I could see them, too!

Author Reply: Iím glad! I loved writing those descriptions ... I can just vividly picture them too. :-) Thx so much for commenting!

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