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Discovery by Ellynn | 8 Review(s) |
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Noway | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/13/2020 |
What the hell did I just read? My God! If your trying to make this realistic I lost it the moment he and the bear stared each other down. Author Reply: Well, all I can say is - if you continue reading, you'll see what happened next and why the bear stared. | |
Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/15/2020 |
This is quite the most dangerous situation any hiker may find himself in. I suspect, however, that this stillness and holding of her gaze may in the end serve him well, better, perhaps, than the pepper spray. Author Reply: Well, I wouldn't like to be in his place and meet a bear, definitely... *shivers* But the big surprise comes for him!!! Thanks for the review! | |
eliza | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/3/2020 |
Happy New Year Ellynn, I didn't review every chapter because once I started reading I couldn't stop long enough to review, lol. This was a great story from beginning to end. lol I did have to giggle at your endnote because even while watching the Hobbit, I wondered where Beorn got his clothes from. Thank you again, this was a well written, very imaginative story and glad to see Beorn getting a little literary love. Author Reply: Well, concerning clothes, I suppose that Beorn didn't have many problems - I mean, we know that for most of time he was either alone, or surrounded by small number of people, so I guess there weren't many chances for him to be seen without clothes *giggles* But today's modern world, with many people around... well, that's more tricky! :) I'm glad you like the story, thanks so much for the review! and happy 2020 :) | |
shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/3/2020 |
What an imaginative story. Beorn's descendants, how wonderful! I really loved these lines: In those deep wise eyes, both human and bear's eyes at the same time, lay hidden a whole world – the world he would now discover. and... all of us will stand together in a final battle against evil. We are stronger than ordinary people and we can give a bigger contribution So heart warming and inspiring. Thank you for this tale. Author Reply: And thank you for reading and reviewing, it means so much to me. *hugs* I'm glad you like it. | |
shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/27/2019 |
Oh my goodness, what's going to happen NOW? I like the descriptions of his new senses... I wonder what it would be like to see/smell/sense the world, for just a few minutes, the way my dog does. Author Reply: I'm glad you like the detail about his new senses :) And yes, I also often wonder how it would be to feel the world if we had better senses - especially when I'm watching documentary movies. Thanks for the review! :) | |
Mirkwoodmaiden | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/21/2019 |
I am fascinated to see where this goes! MM Author Reply: You'll soon discover! :) Thanks for the review :) | |
shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/20/2019 |
What a magical experience. Author Reply: Maybe - but it will also be very scary. Just wait and see. And thanks for the review! :) | |
shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/13/2019 |
I'm intrigued! Looking forward to more. :) Author Reply: Thank you, dear! :) | |