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| Do Not Wake Me by Shireling | 8 Review(s) |
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| K'taara | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 7/31/2005 |
| Pierce my heart and soul. Lovely, beautiful.My poetry could never compare. Why have you come? My heart, my soul, my dreams, You'll never know, Deep inside my secrets grow, Unless you hold the key to unlock The secrets deep inside of me. To reach my hearts own desire, To find the one that I admire, The feelings inside me do erupt, Why have you come,my heart to corrupt? NO COPYWRITING!!! | |
| Iterildea Turelie Earrinde | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 11/12/2004 |
| Very heartwrenching,shows deep feeling.You poured all of your heart and soul into this poem.It seems to me that you wrot what you really feel. KEEP WRITING! I enjoy your writing.you are a natural. I write poetry also. Author Reply: Thank you for a lovely review. I'm so pleased that this poem touched you. :) | |
| Iorhael | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 12/2/2003 |
| I have always admired those who can write poems since I can't! And this one is just so sad. Iorhael | |
| Coriel | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 10/6/2003 |
| Of course! *De profundis* is "from the depths"; I was impressed by how so few words could say so very much. And the rest is simply "Lord, grant them eternal rest." :) *Ut pictura poesis* -- Horace (A poem is like a picture.) All the best ~ | |
| Coriel | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 10/5/2003 |
| Oh, wow. What a powerful litte piece! Truely *de profundis.* I can't find words to do it justice right now; exquisitely sorrowful and yet beautiful at the same time. ((*sniff*)) *Requiem aeternam dona eis, Domine.* Author Reply: Coriel, Thank you. Poetry is a new area for me and I really appreciate your comments. Helen p.s could you translate the Latin for me!! | |
| TigerLily713 | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 9/24/2003 |
| I can almost see his eyes pleading with pain and self-doubt. Well done! Author Reply: TigerLily Thank you for taking the time to review. I really appreciate it. Helen | |
| Nilmandra | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 9/23/2003 |
| I have wondered sometimes if Aragorn and Gandalf saved Frodo for his good, or their own. While I am immensely glad that he sailed west and hope that he found healing there, death might have been greater comfort. You captured his agony well here. Thank you. Author Reply: Nilmandra Thank you. I had the same thoughts myself. Letting go can be so difficult! Helen | |
| Grand Theft Author Otaku | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 9/23/2003 |
| Wow, your a very skilled poet Shireling. Tolkein himself would be proud. I'm going to go and cry now, bye : - ) Author Reply: Thank you Crying is not compulsory but glad to know it touched a chord. Helen | |