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Upon Amon Sűl  by PSW 4 Review(s)
EllynnReviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/29/2022
So dark and scary - good work!

Author Reply: Thanks! Happy you're enjoying. :-)

KateReviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/23/2022
Very excited to read a new chapter! Very chilling. Looking forward to reading what happens next

Author Reply: Thanks! :-) Glad you’re enjoying it!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/23/2022
The sky, the stars, Anor and Ithil – they were no more. Perhaps they had never been.

How easy it would be to lose sanity, and all hope, in such a situation. *shivers*

Author Reply: Yes — agreed. The black breath just sounds terrible …

Thx for reading!

periannoreReviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/23/2022
During his first conversation with Frodo, Sam and Pippin Aragorn mentions that he knows about the Nazgűl. I wonder if he's referring to his encounter with them in your story? Things look so grim. You did wonderfully with your description of Aragorn's battle with the inertia of the black breath. I can only read on knowing Aragorn will survive for LOTR.
I'm worried about Elrohir and Daelin. As I read any fiction I automatically Project what might happen next. In this case I'm wondering if Halbarad, Dorhaur and Elladan will arrive to help or, if they arrived first and were similarly attacked. Oh no!
You've worked up a gripping head of suspense. Write on.


Author Reply: Thank you! Glad you’re enjoying — all will be answered in due time. ;-) Thx so much for your comments!

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