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Home-coming by Ellynn | 11 Review(s) |
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Galathil | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 4/8/2024 |
Hi Ellynn. I love the twist at the end. It would be nice if the world was as peaceful,as the animals describe. Galathil | |
Galathil | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 4/8/2024 |
Hi Ellynn. I love the twist at the end. It would be nice if the world was as peaceful,as the animals describe. Galathil Author Reply: Hey, thank you so much for your kind words :) | |
Aldwen | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 1/7/2024 |
Oh, what a great story! Loved the twist; you totally fooled me! :-))) On the serious note - I find it so lovely that you give voice to the animals involved in the war. I hope the poor Oliphaunt finds lovely pasture! Author Reply: Thank you so much, dear hugs* | |
sue | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 1/6/2024 |
Very well written! I loved the POV change when we realize these are not soldiers going home and then again realizing they are mumlaks. Wow...just wow. What a great punch for a short story. Congratulations! Author Reply: Thank you so much for the compliments! :))) | |
Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 1/4/2024 |
This was just lovely and a great twist at the end. Author Reply: Thank you so much for your kind words *hugs* | |
Faerie | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 1/1/2024 |
This is a beautifully written story. I must admit I was stumped by the twist. At first I thought it was an old man, then a horse, then at the mention of tusk I realised that it was a mumak, lol Unexpected yet impactful. Author Reply: Thank you so much for your kind review 😊 | |
Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 12/30/2023 |
Fascinating premise, and completely believable. I'm glad to see you're still posting and writing. (I keep hoping for writing time, but then I keep getting derailed by work. Still, it's nice to see SoA is still here, and new chapters/stories are being posted. I will keep hoping.) Author Reply: Yep, still writing 😊 I've been working on a new novel (won't be ready for posting before 2025), and I write an occasional short story. My advice is to set small goals, low word-count per day, so that it is achievable despite work 😉 Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! 😊 | |
UTfrog | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 12/30/2023 |
I really liked this. Thank you. Author Reply: I am so happy to hear it, thank you! 😊 | |
Erulissé | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 12/30/2023 |
This is an awesome story! What incredible emotion and twists. First I thought he was an old man, then a horse, and then I realized he was an Oliphant. Double thumbs up! Wonderful job! Thank you! Author Reply: And thank you so much for the compliments 💜 | |
Lady Forlong | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 12/30/2023 |
I love your delightful twists. First I think he's human, then for a moment I thought he was a horse, and finally I find out he's an "oliphaunt." A lovely reminder that Men and Elves and orcs weren't the only ones who fought in the War. Author Reply: Hehe, I do love to write twists. 😀 Thank you so much, I am glad you like this. | |