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Home-coming  by Ellynn 11 Review(s)
GalathilReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 4/8/2024
Hi Ellynn. I love the twist at the end. It would be nice if the world was as peaceful,as the animals describe.

Galathil

GalathilReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 4/8/2024
Hi Ellynn. I love the twist at the end. It would be nice if the world was as peaceful,as the animals describe.

Galathil

AldwenReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 1/7/2024
Oh, what a great story! Loved the twist; you totally fooled me! :-))) On the serious note - I find it so lovely that you give voice to the animals involved in the war. I hope the poor Oliphaunt finds lovely pasture!

Author Reply: Thank you so much, dear hugs*

sueReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 1/6/2024
Very well written! I loved the POV change when we realize these are not soldiers going home and then again realizing they are mumlaks. Wow...just wow. What a great punch for a short story. Congratulations!

Author Reply: Thank you so much for the compliments! :)))

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 1/4/2024
This was just lovely and a great twist at the end.

Author Reply: Thank you so much for your kind words *hugs*

FaerieReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 1/1/2024
This is a beautifully written story. I must admit I was stumped by the twist. At first I thought it was an old man, then a horse, then at the mention of tusk I realised that it was a mumak, lol
Unexpected yet impactful.

Author Reply: Thank you so much for your kind review 😊

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 12/30/2023
Fascinating premise, and completely believable. I'm glad to see you're still posting and writing. (I keep hoping for writing time, but then I keep getting derailed by work. Still, it's nice to see SoA is still here, and new chapters/stories are being posted. I will keep hoping.)

Author Reply: Yep, still writing 😊 I've been working on a new novel (won't be ready for posting before 2025), and I write an occasional short story.
My advice is to set small goals, low word-count per day, so that it is achievable despite work 😉
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! 😊

UTfrogReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 12/30/2023
I really liked this. Thank you.

Author Reply: I am so happy to hear it, thank you! 😊

ErulissťReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 12/30/2023
This is an awesome story! What incredible emotion and twists. First I thought he was an old man, then a horse, and then I realized he was an Oliphant. Double thumbs up! Wonderful job! Thank you!

Author Reply: And thank you so much for the compliments 💜

Lady ForlongReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 12/30/2023
I love your delightful twists. First I think he's human, then for a moment I thought he was a horse, and finally I find out he's an "oliphaunt." A lovely reminder that Men and Elves and orcs weren't the only ones who fought in the War.

Author Reply: Hehe, I do love to write twists. 😀
Thank you so much, I am glad you like this.

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