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Delayed  by PSW 4 Review(s)
ItarilleReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/21/2025
Thank you for re-uploading this story! I had never considered how much Saruman's betrayal must have hurt Gandalf, but of course it did. They were comrades, sent to Middle-earth on a mission together.
I like the way you write Elrond and Gandalf. In my imagination Gandalf was even more gruff :)

MirkwoodmaidenReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/20/2025
PSW!

I really enjoyed this! But for the Breach of January 2025 I might never have found it. I love the relationship between Elrond and Gandalf. It has the feel two have been friends for a very long time and they need not hold back what they think or feel. Each has their thoughts and feelings and I love how Elrond finally relents and places all aside to feel empathy for Gandalf and the betrayal that he feels. Very nicely done!

Thanks!

MM

Author Reply: Thank you! I’m so glad you liked it. I really enjoyed trying to get into Galndalf’s and Elrond’s kinds for this one - they are both so old and wise that it was a fun challenge.

And yes - at least perhaps the Breach of 2025 (I like that name) will give us a chance to discover some ‘new’ old stories in the process….

Thx so much for your lovely comments!

demeter dReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 1/20/2025
Yeah, welcome back!

Author Reply: Thank you! :-D

UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/19/2025
Wow! Very powerful. Excellent

Author Reply: Thank you! I’m so glad you enjoyed - thx for your lovely comments!

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