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Her Choice  by Meldewen Ilce 1 Review(s)
SphinxReviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/12/2003
Nice, except for the fact that you used 'Gwilwileth-nin' at least six times.

I liked Celeborn here. Good characterization.

Sphinx

Author Reply: LOL - didn't realize I used that endearment so much! I went back and changed a few of the uses of 'Gwilwileth-nin' to something else - thanks for pointing that out!

And it's nice to know I got Celeborn somewhat right with my characterzation of him!

Thanks again!

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