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| Ada's Day by Meldewen Ilce | 3 Review(s) |
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| xsilicax | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/6/2004 |
| Oh excellent! I had a wonderful sense of Aragorn's weariness struggling to combat his sense of duty. His acquesiance to Arwen's demands shows just how exhausted he is, that he cannot even argue his point. I love how you've written her as caring and loving, simple but deep characterisations are always the best. I cannot wait for more chapters, somehow I doubt that things will go as simply as Aragorn would wish. Cathy, xx | |
| Levanna | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/27/2003 |
| Hey, pretty cool. I thought it might be more funny though. ? Anyway, nice grammerically and all that technical stuff. Anymore chapters? I couldn't access it with the next button. Said the chappie didn't exsist. ? Anyway, goodjob. Levanna Author Reply: I am working on the next two chapters - the computer I was using to work on this crashed a little while ago and I have lost a good bit of my files. I will try to get Chapters 2 and 3 as soon as I can! Thank you! | |
| The Karenator | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/20/2003 |
| A great start. I like Arwen's little looks at Aragorn and his advisor as the session wore on ...and on... I think she's right; Aragorn needs a day off. But I have this funny little feeling that this day off will not turn out as planned. Good characterizations. I could feel the tone of the characters as they interacted. You set a good pace, kind of peaceful with the determined personality of Arwen coming through and Aragorn's fatigue. He was reluctant to agree but nearly too weary to fight. The interaction of the married couple was well done. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. So what kind of trouble is brewing? Karen Author Reply: Thanks for the review! I am still writing/planning chapters 2 & 3 but I hope when they're done they won't bore you and perhaps they'll be sort of what you expected! Thanks for reading my story! | |