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A Ray of Hope  by Tinnuial 3 Review(s)
KarriReviewed Chapter: 2 on 7/29/2004
Quite the entertaining conversation between elf lords. Well done. :-) (one minor typo: the apostrophe goes on the other side of the T on 'tis.)

FadesintothewestReviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/6/2003
Oh that was delightful. Your Thranduil and Glorfindel are so well written and of course who could not love little Legolas! Thanks for the wonderful chapter.

Brenda G.Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/28/2003
Well, this just keeps getting better! I hope the evil exams have not stripped your mind of all creativity and that we will soon see Chapter 3 to "A Ray of Hope."

The friendship between Glorfindel and Thranduil was a wonderful way to explore Chapter 2 and gave your readers great insight to our regal Thranduil (who does not always conduct himself so--good for him). All cozied up with fine wine and trading stories from the past is a good way to spend an evening in a friend's company, and I laughed as much as Glorfindel at Thranduil's means of acquisition of the vintage Dorwinion wine! I am as anxious as young Legolas for more of his father's esteemed companion, so bring on the blond bombshell from Imladris.

This is terrific writing - holds the reader's interest, is entertaining, intriging, and definitely whets the appetite for more. So, how about it?

Marvelous!

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