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| The 12Days Challenge by Grey Wonderer | 82 Review(s) |
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| Hai Took | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/21/2005 |
| LOL! That was great! Painting turtles! I was a bit worried when it was a live thing Pippin was painting, you never know with little children! Wonderful! Frodo did an admirable job of not laughing, at least in front of Pippin! Author Reply: A young neighbor of ours once painted a turtle's shell, but didn't give the turtle wings, he just painted it white and we washed it off because we figured that the white would attract too many enemies to the poor turtle. Fortunately it didn't seem to hurt the turtle. | |
| Hai Took | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/21/2005 |
| Well I'm a bit late in beginning these but I have begun! The way you did the whole thing with only the dialogue was great! It made it more comical somehow. Very amusing, thank you! Author Reply: Somehow, I seem to be better at dialogue than discription and so this was easier for me than some of my others. Glad you liked it. | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 3/21/2005 |
The thoughts of the enemy as they prepare for war.Very good... Author Reply: Glad you enjoyed it. My first try at writing the enemy. | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 3/21/2005 |
| Legolas smoking,thats something to see. Pippin giving him the advise to not set anything on fire makes you woder if he sis when he first learned to smoke. The description Legolas gives when smoking is very true to someone who dosen't like to..Very nice.. Author Reply: Thank you for this review. Glad you enjoyed it! | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 3/21/2005 |
Sometimes the leaps of faith lead us where they need to be other times not.Nice piece Author Reply: This one took a while to come up with. Having to use eleven Lords in one story took some thinking. Glad you enjoyed it. | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 3/21/2005 |
LOL...This one had me laughing... I love the humor in this. Pippin is a good story telling,and laying it on thick...Very good... Author Reply: He did spin an interesting tale in this one. Thanks for reviewing it. | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 3/21/2005 |
All I can say is poor Freddy,and Frodo... Author Reply: Yes, those two got the worest of this little adventure, didn't they? | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/21/2005 |
That was just plain mean of them...Dumping Legolas in the water...Funny ... Author Reply: Nothing funnier than a wet elf! | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 3/21/2005 |
| Poor Frodo... He got snared by Pippin and Merry just to avoid those irritating old ladies....Frodo willsurley kill them if he ever gets his hands on them.... Author Reply: Yes, they may be in for a bit of trouble once Frodo excapes the old ladies. LOL | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 3/21/2005 |
This one was touching. The way it was writing is different from the rest and sets it apart... Rings..In a way is like life and the choices that make us who we become. Some of those our the bonds of friendship,those of a child who hods our heart. Then those of family that even when we go onward is unbreakable. Here Frodo is going,but he looks back on the past and knows all will be well. Merry is the caretaker,and will care for them.. This is a very well written piece...Good job... Author Reply: I don't often do serious and so I am glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words. | |