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| Don't Panic! by Boz4PM | 155 Review(s) |
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| Ivy | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 7/30/2006 |
| "There was no way on earth she could hallucinate something like him. He was beyond imagination." Yes, you're right...I didn't really think of the LOTR movie elves as being *that* beautiful, though they certainly had rather otherworldly features...and I love Elladan's personality. Though the whole thing with the elves and combs seems a *tad* cliché...but hey, whatever. :) I really loved this chapter. It had just the right amount of psychology and action in it, though I do admit I wish Penny would act a bit less hysterical and try to seem under control...you know? I guess it's part of the character, though (and of course OCs are easy targets for self-projection. I'm one of those calm-in-a-crisis people...Penny seems to be...ish. haha), and the important part is that you've been consistent with it. Nice work. Ciao! Ivy | |
| Ivy | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 7/30/2006 |
| You're really very good at writing psychology, you know that? This is excellent...her thinking that she is insane rather than thinking that she's actually in Middle-Earth. You've really made me feel for both of these characters, and seeing as how I don't remember much about Halbarad, it's basically 2 OCs to me...that's a huge accomplishment (at least from my perspective), since I have trouble liking even one OC (well, *cough*, at least those I haven't written, lol. JK, haha). Once again..."may" is incorrect. But I said that already, haha. (It's a common grammatical error..."may" is generally only used in asking permission/granting permission--ability=can, as you know--and "might" is for the possibility of something happening.) Just...wow. That's really all I can say. I'm off to read the next bit! May I assume this is...Legolas? I don't know...I assumed Aragorn, but you did say something about a beautiful voice, and I think of elves automatically when I read that... Ciao! Ivy :) | |
| Ivy | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 7/30/2006 |
| Bloody BRILLIANT. Ah, I can't decide if I'm inspired or terrified to try continuing my story, lol. I was wondering when she was going to let fall some names and have him stare at her in shock...your portrayal here is very good. By the way, what is WETA? I know it's something to do with authenticity, but I can't remember... Nice job. I'm sorry it's not a longer review, but it's all I can really say, because there is nothing to criticize, lol...oh, except make sure that you use "might" instead of "may" in "he suspected he may never discover it". Otherwise, the grammar/spelling/etc. is great. Ciao! Ivy :) http://www.fanfiction.net/~folk | |
| Ivy | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/30/2006 |
| Oh my GOD...this is absolutely amazing. I started one of these fics, but due to my other project (Harry Potter), I haven't actually done more than one chapter... ANYWAY. About your story...I'm not normally a fan of OCs, but I really like Penny thus far. Very, very good job. The descriptions are amazing...the scene with her walking to the hills is a bit rushed, and I think it's because the sentences are so short, which is easily fixed (if you want to; it's your call). Detail is wonderful... Overall, this is one of the best fanfics I have ever read (and I do *not* say that lightly). I'd be honored if you'd take a look at my work...www.fanfiction.net/~folk, fanfiction.net username folk (go "search") if the link doesn't show up. I'm also on www.freewebs.com/folklights Excellent job! Ciao, Ivy :) | |
| el_esteleth | Reviewed Chapter: 27 on 6/3/2006 |
| I just wanted to post a little something to let you know that I've thoroughly enjoyed Don't Panic. I had expected to finish this story several weeks ago but my comp crashed, and I was honestly very upset that I couldn't finish reading this story. You've done and absolutely wonderful job with Penny and with portraying a realistic look at what being dropped into ME would be like. I admit I was skeptical at first when a friend recommended this story to me, but the fabulous writing, plot and character development completely got rid of any initial skepticism. I look forward to reading Penny's further adventures in the sequel. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent for writing and this wonderful story. Es. | |
| AspenJules | Reviewed Chapter: 27 on 5/29/2006 |
| I thought about reviewing as I went along, and I probably should have, but decided not to for a couple of reasons that really aren't all that important. I just have to say that I don't think I've ever read a fanfic that had me in tears for so many chapters in a row. OK, maybe I'm just a weeping Wanda, but maybe not. I was so very moved by Penny's dilemma of what to tell and what not to tell, and when. Of knowing if she tried to save a friend's life she could doom everybody to destruction. That truly is a heavy burden to carry, and yet, being a caring human, it's hard to ignore the fate of one person she knows for the fate of multitudes she doesn't. It's a mark of her very humanity that she had such a wrestle with it. Boz, this was amazing. If there was a prize for the challenge, I hope you took it. As is the case with any good tale, your story left me with much to think about outside the parameters of your story, and I don't believe I am the same person I was when I started reading it. On a lighter note - I love the funny parts as well, giggling hysterically when Penny comes on the half-dressed elves (now THERE'D be a sight!! *heavy sigh*), when she puts Lindir in his place, Elladan's reaction to Penny borrowing his comb and then telling Halbarad off for not buying her one, Aragorn snorting in his cup when Elrond tells Halbarad to apologize to her, and them all feeling like 12-year olds when she tells them off for continuing to laugh. There were so many other times as well. All there is to say then, really, is thank you. Thank you for the laughs, for the tears, and for the food for thought. Thanks for your efforts, and those of your betas. I'm off to start the sequel now! | |
| Nienor Niniel | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 5/8/2006 |
| He. I was wondering when *that* particular physical problem would come up. But at least it didn't happen when she was on road with Halbarad. I don't think she could have explained that to him! I wonder how she will solve it. I am glad you let Legolas stay a "normal" Elf, if there is such a thing at all. Take that, fangirls! You'll hear more from me later! Nienor | |
| Nienor Niniel | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 5/8/2006 |
| I'm starting to catch up in earnest! I just love what you did... you thought of everything that Penny would be surprised about, and how her reactions would be. And I guess that making up the way Elvish latrines would be takes some imagination. It's great that she is asking the Glorfindel question: One or two? Indeed, who wouldn't want to find out? But she should really have used her chance to find out if the Balrog had wings. Well, I guess it would have been rude to ask. So now I'm going to see what Elrond is going to shout at her! Nienor | |
| paranoidangel | Reviewed Chapter: 27 on 3/10/2006 |
| I started reading this when Nilmandra recced it on her LJ, but have only just finished it. I really enjoyed it - seeing how much Penny changes and gets used to her new life. I really liked the relationship that built up between Penny and Halbarad - the end of the last chapter was so sad. | |
| Nienor Niniel | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/21/2006 |
| Oh, I think that him just leaving her in Bree would be an interesting alternative storyline. How would the people react? But I guess it will be a lot better if he drags her to Rivendell. This is really realistic! And I am torn between pitying both of them. They both are so completely right with the things they are annoyed at. What a dilemma! I love your AN! It's great when people actually know that! I'll read on, of course! Nienor Author Reply: Thank you for your comments and taking the time to review (let alone read). I am glad you are still finding it interesting and enjoyable. :) | |