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| Yours to command by Lialathuveril | 292 Review(s) |
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| Iteralday Earrinde | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 7/13/2007 |
| I am slightly confused as to what Lothiriel's plight is... what is it that sets her apart so? I am really enjoying the story so far =] Author Reply: Pleased to hear you enjoy the story and the confusion is deliberate I'm afraid ;-) Lia | |
| SpoonMaidenOfTheShire | Reviewed Chapter: 34 on 7/10/2007 |
| Wow, all I can say in congratulations on a job well done. It was beautifully written, the entire story, and I am very impressed. Congratulations. ~SpoonMaid Author Reply: Thank you! It's been a lot of work, but also a lot fun to write. And I hope to take what I've learned forward into the next project - the plot bunnies are busy again... Lia | |
| SurgicalSteel | Reviewed Chapter: 34 on 7/5/2007 |
| *applauds* A lovely end to a lovely tale! Author Reply: *bows* Thank you! Glad to hear that you enjoyed it and until another time, I hope. Lia | |
| galiimeril | Reviewed Chapter: 34 on 7/4/2007 |
| A beautiful Conclusion to a delightful story. You really ought to consider writing someting to be published, you certainly have a unique flare that attracts the imagination and sets any lingering fancies free. I enjoyed your style and insights and I hope you write again soon! Until Next Time! Author Reply: Thank you! Although I think I'm better off sticking to writing computer programs to earn my living - even though they're less entertaining ;-) But I'm pleased to hear you enjoyed the ride. There are already more stories brewing in my mind (short ones please!), but first I'm off on holiday. Until we meet again! Lia | |
| Tira | Reviewed Chapter: 34 on 7/3/2007 |
| Oh, wonderful end!! I am kinda sad to see it finished, but I loved it all the same!! Author Reply: These two have been living in my mind for over a year now, so I feel a bit sad, too. But I hope I've given them a fitting ending and I'm sure they can manage on their own now. Thanks for reviewing! Lia | |
| Cuthalion | Reviewed Chapter: 34 on 7/2/2007 |
| Wonderful and satisfying - and Éomer, trying his best to finally get his brand new wife into the bedchamber! What a lovely, sensual chapter this has been, and what a wonderful tale. You should know that it has moved on my long translation list (though it will certainly take some months before I'll begin to start with the German version in earnest. Thank you - that was glorious, and I'm almost sad that it's over. *bows in respect and joy* Cúthalion Author Reply: I have to admit I just couldn't resist tormenting him a little bit more in this final chapter, but Eomer did get his wish in the end. And I'm also a bit sad it's over and that I have to say good-bye to these two. I've grown rather fond of them! But at the same time I'm pleased to hear you enjoyed the ride - good luck with translating the story, I'm intrigued to see what you'll make of it. Liebe Grüsse und vielen Dank für deine Unterstützung von Anfang an! Lia | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 34 on 7/2/2007 |
| “Does Aunt Lothíriel have to go to bed already?” LOLOL. That one made me laugh out loud. You can see how from a kid's POV, Lothiriel is getting cheated out of a party. But how nice to see them married. They're a blessing to each other. Author Reply: Yes, that's the kind of thing my own kids would say - fancy going to bed when you're allowed to stay up! And I agree, they've been blessed to find each other. Thanks for your reviews! Lia | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 34 on 7/2/2007 |
| As one who has lived with and worked with the blind for over a third of a century, it's been wonderful to see a story that depicts a character who's blind realistically and positively. Blessed Eomer indeed, having such a wife, one who by not seeing will teach him to see more clearly and to listen more closely and feel more deeply. A most wonderful and worthy story, and one I've been privileged to read and enjoy. Author Reply: I'm pleased that with your experience of working and living with blind people you should think my depiction of Lothiriel realistic. It's really been a learning experience writing from a blind view-point! And I think I've been privileged in my readers - I never thought there would be much interest in a blind Lothiriel, but while some people did hate the idea, most of them appreciated the unique insights and strengths it gave her. Like you said, Eomer (and the Rohirrim) will learn a lot from her. Thank you for your support! Lia | |
| Adrianne | Reviewed Chapter: 33 on 6/25/2007 |
| Wow! What a fabulous story! I apologize for not leaving a comment before now, but I just spent the weekend reading this from one end to the other. I loved your characterization of Éomer and especially Lothíriel. What a stroke of brilliance to write her as blind, and you did it so very well. So well, that I need to ask if you know someone who is blind? If not you have an exceptionally keen and empathetic spirit. I loved that Lothíriel saw colors in peoples voices. I also liked the fact that, even though others see her blindness as a handicap (even her well intentioned family), she does not. And Éomer didn't see it as a handicap either. Rather he saw the strength and character and nobility in the woman. Blind or not, Rohan is getting one magnificent queen! Speaking of magnificent, your Éomer is just that! I fell in love with the man. Strong and fiery and noble, and more importantly a man that is more impressed with a strong character than a fair face. This was an absolute pleasure to read. It had intrigue, suspense, romance and adventure. And a really good moral. Great villian too! That whole chapter where Muzgâsh tries to violate Lothíriel was very well written. He was perfectly nasty and slimey and just evil. I look forward to your epilogue with great anticipation. Adrianne Author Reply: Thank you - I'm so pleased to hear you enjoyed the story! As a matter of fact I do not know anybody who is blind, although I have a couple of close friends who have handicapped children, so I have at least a slight idea of the kind of obstacles and prejudices they have to face in life. That is one of the reasons why it is a topic dear to me - and also I admire people who will not let their limitations stop them from achieving their dreams. I tried to show Lothiriel as such a person, by no means perfect, but doing her best to find a meaningful place in life. Like you wrote, fortunately she met a man who truly appreciates her. As for Muzgash, I wanted him to be more than just a 'James Bond' style villain, talking endlessly, but never carrying through his threats. But in the end he got more than he bargained for when he kidnapped Lothiriel! Well, I hope you'll enjoy the epilogue as well. Unfortunately my real life woes are continuing, but I still hope to have it ready for you sometime next week. Thanks for reviewing! Lia | |
| obsidianj | Reviewed Chapter: 33 on 6/21/2007 |
| Ahh, this chapter makes up for all the hardship of the previous chapters. I love the name of the chapter. It fits so well. Lothiriel is a force to be reckoned with. I loved the way she kept Eomer awake. No time for proprieties, pragmatism (and she wished to do that for a long time, right?) won out. I nearly spewed on my keyboard when the royal guard faithfully guarded the rose bush without any comment ;-). It has to be hard to be royalty. Lothiriel has one advantage, she can't see any looks or smirks anyone throws at her. Author Reply: I'm pleased to hear the chapter made up for what I put them through - I was actually starting to feel a bit guilty for all the angst. And Lothiriel is coming into her own - I get the feeling Eomer is in for further surprises and Rohan will never be the same again. But that's for another story (perhaps). Glad to hear you enjoyed it! | |