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| The Dark of Night by Ellie | 52 Review(s) |
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| Elflingimp | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 10/31/2006 |
| Well that was a dark little tale! But I loved it,for some reason I thought it was funny when the spider talked, I am glad everyone survived and Elrond didnt blow a blood vessal yelling at Elrohir and Elleden LOL Author Reply: I'm so glad you enjoyed this. It was so much fun to write. I wish I could think of soemthing else "fun" to write. Any suggestions? | |
| vampfan30 | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 10/31/2006 |
| the end ? *sniff* really?? that's just so .... sudden..... Author Reply: Sorry! I sort of ran out of things to do to them and out of warriors healthy enough to get everyone else home. But I left it open with Shelob still out there munching on crunchy elf surprise. or would that be surprised crunchy elf? I'm so bad. anyway... I'm tickled that you enjoyed the story so much that you didn't want it to end. Perhaps my twins muse or my Haldir muse will find me again and bring some juicy morsels for me to write about and perhpas they will bring a plot and good storyline as well and not just the twins and Haldir as juicy morsels. I'm rambling and it's time to get the kids from school. Thanks for reading and reviewing! | |
| Calenlass Greenleaf | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 10/31/2006 |
| You "spin" a very interesting tale. (Yes, I know that's corny, LOL.) But I enjoyed this story while it lasted. Author Reply: And what better place to post this spider story than on the World Wide Web??? AHAHAHAHHAHA Thanks so very much for reading, reviewing and most especially for enjoying this tale, my first attempt at writing a spooky, horror, scary story! | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/30/2006 |
| Being trodden on will be the least of it! When their family find out what they've been up to E2 will be toast! But at least they've discovered how to get rid of spiders' eggs. I do hope they don't get trapped up there with nasty parent spiders and hatchlings. That is the last thing they need! Author Reply: Yep, the twins do serve some useful purpose on occasion. You'll have to wait and see what happens next... Thanks for reading and reviewing! | |
| Redheredh | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/29/2006 |
| Ooo, I liked this chapter for its interplay and action. :) Things went along very realistically for the intrepid rescuers you sent in. I was getting worried you were gonna go for a Alien twist, but a Them flavor was fine, just fine, thankyouverymuch! But!! *They* are coming back and when they find the egg-sacs disposed...well, I am glad I am only reading and not there! Run away! Run away! Author Reply: This chapter was fun to write with all of the creepiness, and human guys are wont to start poking fun at each other when things get too spooky , so I figured elves would do this, too. I'm pleased you enjoyed this chapter. Hope you like ch 8! Thanks for reading and reviewing! | |
| Redheredh | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/29/2006 |
| Oh of course, the two trouble-making brothers would out the other two trouble-making brothers! But, you did that *just* to put them into worse trouble!! *shudder* I could just hear that "awful sound, too". So, at least one of the creatures knew the story of Earendil?! Three evil sister had come looking for revenge?! Mercy-sakes...there might be only two left, but... Heck, we know the twins are alive. You're not going to go AU on us now, are ya?! | |
| Calenlass Greenleaf | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/27/2006 |
| tense...very tense. At least..I hope the twins will be all right. Author Reply: Yes, it was tense. I didn't get to my replies to reviews before you reviewed ch 8. Hope I resolved it well enough to suit you! Thanks for reading and reviewing! | |
| Elflingimp | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/26/2006 |
| Ugh! again,this is giving me the creeps but I love it, your descriptions of the spiders cave and the dead body make me want to run far away but I cant wait for more!(go figure) Author Reply: I'm glad the dexscriptions are working so well. I made my family watch the Shelob scene of ROTK several times and made my kids look for tiny details (like dripping water and tiny dead animals) to be sure I got the descriptions right. Thrilled I could creep you out! Hope you enjoy ch 8! Thanks for reading and reviewing! | |
| vampfan30 | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/26/2006 |
| I think that I might be feeling a little saner now that they are at least halfway rescued... maybe. ^__^ Author Reply: GLad you are feelings daner. That is good, but they aren't out yet. muwahahahaha Thansk for reading and reviewing! | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/26/2006 |
| And if Elrond's sons are alive (and they'd better be!) they might wish they weren't after their parents and grandparents and Glorfindel and anybody willing to have a go at them has crushed them into powder! Just as the battle seemed to have been going so well, too! Should have know it was too good to be true. Fingers crossed for E2. Author Reply: You are correct about the wishing to be dead thing for the twins. If they don't become spider food, then they will be toast. some choice, huh? Thanks for reading and reviewing! | |