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| The Search by Jay of Lasgalen | 54 Review(s) |
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| LKK | Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 2/23/2004 |
| Good to see that Elrohir and the younger elf are no longer at odds. And to see that the mother holds no rancor towards Elrohir. Do the young elflings call both twins Lord El? Or is that reserved for Elrohir? Or maybe they can't tell the twins apart and settled on Lord El as a way to always get it right? Loved the ending moment between Elladan and Elrohir. Such a typical teasing brother moment. This story seems like it wrapping up to a happy conclusion. Of course, I've thought that before about this story. LOL LKK Author Reply: Both the twins are 'Lord El' - the elflings can't tell them apart any more than anyone else, so it makes life easier. As I said to Daw, I wondered about that scene, and Elrohir's remark. I'm glad it worked. The story really is nearing the end this time, and I've about half finished the final chapter. But the plot bunnies are gathering under my desk ... Jay | |
| Elendiari22 | Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 2/14/2004 |
| Yay! An update! This is a gret chapter; I'm glad to see Elladan awake and well. Author Reply: Yes, he is awake, and despite current appearances, he will be well. Eventually. Jay | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 2/14/2004 |
| One of the things I like about this is that you don't portray these people as unmotivated villains or saints. People make mistakes but they can see reason and do better. And I like the collusion of the twins at the end against Elrond's orders that Elladan should stay in bed. I know what Elladan feels! Author Reply: I try hard to make my characters three-dimensional, and also try to give the twins distinct personalities. I wondered for a long time whether to include that final scene, especially Elrohir's comment - was it too crude, did it sound slashy? Thankfully, people seem to have liked it! Jay | |
| LKK | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 1/4/2004 |
| Good to see that Elladan finally believes that Elrohir is alive and well! Now maybe he can get on with the business of healing. He'll have to curb his impatience though otherwise he might hinder the process somehow. (Why is it that an immortal race can be *so* impatient at times???) I'm glad Beregar finally learned the truth about Elrohir's actions. Legolas handled the situation well. He could easily have become angered over Elrohir's treatment. But he kept Beregar's grief in mind and simply presented the facts. It must not have been an easy situation for him. Good chapter, Jay. I've been hoping for an update for a bit now. :-) LKK Author Reply: Well, updates aren't usually this slow - hopefully things will improve now. Legolas did handle the situation well - but he has been trained as a diplomat in his father's court! Jay | |
| sofia | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 1/3/2004 |
| YAY! he's conscious again! Author Reply: He is indeed - and getting better all the time. Thanks for the review! Jay | |
| FirstMate | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 1/3/2004 |
| Oh yay! Finally an update to "The Search!" I really enjoyed it (as always, of course). I liked the way Elladan kept looking over to Elrohir to make sure he hadn't been dreaming after all and also how Arwen for once was able to take care of her brothers. And I'm very glad that Legolas straightened out Beregar. He definitely owe's Elrohir a big apology and needed to know what a toad he'd been! Well, I know you're working on several stories, so I won't expect an update too soon, but I'll still be watching for it! Author Reply: I'm glad you picked up on Elladan checking that Elrohir was really there - he's still a bit unsure. And I loved writing the role reversal of Arwen looking after her brothers, instead of the other way around. Beregar has now done the right thing, so matters are better there. Now, I've finally updated, when will you? Jay | |
| Nilmandra | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 1/3/2004 |
| I am glad to see Elladan awake and aware that Elrohir still lived. Arwen did well to lull them both to sleep, especially after *not* telling Elrohir to get some rest! Author Reply: Arwen knows her brothers well - she knows how to deal with them better than anyone. And I like to see her caring for them, for a change! Jay | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 1/3/2004 |
| I'm glad to see an update to this story. You have several going at once, Jay. I could never do that. I would get too confused! Things are going well here, I think. And even Beregar is making progress, although it is of a sad kind. It's nice to see Arwen looking after her brothers. Author Reply: I've seen several stories where the twins are protective of Arwen - Nilmandra's History Lessons is a lovely example - so I thought I'd reverse their roles. Having several stories at once *is* confusing, and it goes wrong at times like this, when I do not have time to update even one! Jay | |
| LKK | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 12/7/2003 |
| I have been gone so long, I bet you've forgotten who I am. But I haven't forgotten your story. Your wonderful, emotional, roller coaster ride of a story. What have I missed since my last review? -- A beautiful portrayal of parents aching for a missing child. This is a side of the stories we so seldom see in fanfiction: the thoughts of the worried parents. -- A switch in the brothers' worries. We spend many chapters fearing for Elrohir, only to have our concerns flipped to Elladan who believes his brother is dead. -- A family in mourning, with a son who lashes out in anger over his grief. I hope someone explains to him what really happened and that he and Elrohir reach a peace before the story ends. There are more wonderful moments in the chapters I missed reviewing, I know. As for this chapter --- Elrohir's fear was heartwrenching. Celebrian's amusement at the "son of an orc" reference added a small (and welcome!) touch of comedic relief. I'm glad that Elladan made the decision to return even though he still believed Elrohir was dead. So many authors would have had Elladan learning that his twin was alive and *then* returning. Your way was far more powerful. Although I didn't get every chapter reviewed, I loved every one. I feel like this story is drawing to a close. Of course, the last time I felt that way in this story, you surprised me by paralyzing Elladan. Any more evil surprises hiding in that pen of yours??? LKK Author Reply: The story is winding down, but there will be one or two more chapters yet - a few loose ends to tie up. I hope to update this weekend, I haven't abandoned this story! I find angst easy to write, the happy families part is harder. That must say something about me! Many thanks for your review - it's nice to know things from other chapters that you liked as well. Jay | |
| Yuna_Dax | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 11/21/2003 |
| WOOHOO!! Another brilliant chapter:) I am so loving the angst, but also the subtle humour you work in as well. The bit with Elrohir calling Elladan a ' Son of an Orc' then getting sprung was simply amazing :) Alas I wait for more :) Jules Author Reply: There will be more, I promise. I just have a slight work overload at the moment. There will be more angst to come, but I'm glad you like the other touches as well. Although Elrohir is desperately worried, I could see him becoming frustrated with his brother's lack of response too. Jay | |