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Tide of Destiny - Part One: Choices  by Lady Bluejay 111 Review(s)
RadbooksReviewed Chapter: 30 on 1/19/2009
I'm enjoying this story very, very much! Forgive me for being lax in my reviewing, but I do eagerly await each chapter and print it out and read it as quickly as I can! I really like how much Lothiriel has grown and developed, Eomer too, but especially her. I'm eagerly looking forward to their trip to Dol Amroth. Oh, I'm also interested in seeing what he tells her about Bergit and her children... if he does. :)

Author Reply: Hi,

He does tell her -but not until the third part - which is post wedding.

Glad you are still enjoying. Thanks for reviewing.LBJ

AlquawendeReviewed Chapter: 30 on 1/18/2009
I have been following along, but have just not been a very good reader by not reviewing... :( Apologies!

This was an excellent chapter. I just love everything about this story. I especially liked the insights into Elphir and Meren's relationship. You really should write a story about them. No one's written a story dedicated to Elphir yet and you have created such a romantic story for him already! Another thing I liked was that the brothers, which I'm afraid have fallen into flat-supporting characters in fandom, I've noticed, are unique and different from each other and what fandom has created for them.

some pickies:
>> I know you won’t want to see him, if fact Éomer told me very forcefully that he won’t allow any risk of you being upset, so you can stay on here.

Do you mean, "in fact"? Not "if fact"?

>> Éomer took hold of her hand again.

Also, in the story, "Eomer" when you put your mouse over it is in link format or something. Just thought you mgiht want to know.

Thanks for writing!

Author Reply: Glad you like my brothers. I enjoy putting in the little snippets.
Sorry about the formatting - blame vista it doesn't like my old files. I am working on it.

Thanks for reviewing.LBJ

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 30 on 1/18/2009
Lothy's willingness to see the new ruler of Harad says a lot on how much she has recovered. Poor couple has to wait for almost a year? Awww... Will we see more of Amroth? Thanks for the update.

Author Reply: Well, I hope it passes quickly for them! Amroth does appear again in this part, but you will have a whole story about him after this.

Thanks for reviewing.LBJ

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 29 on 1/5/2009
Another enjoyable installment. I loved all the romance and laughed out loud at Welwyn's and Lothy's "deal". Amroth is adorable too.

Author Reply: I quite like Amroth - much more of him in part 2. Thanks for your lovely reviews. LBJ

Queens ReaderReviewed Chapter: 29 on 1/4/2009
Another wonderful chapter! Thank you so much!

Author Reply: Thank you. So pleased you are enjoying it.LBJ

SimplegirlfromLPReviewed Chapter: 28 on 1/2/2009
Lady Bluejay,

Love, Love, Love this story. Very cleaver the way you add text from the LOTR before a chapter to set up the scene. Please don't stop writing.

SimplegirlfromLP

Author Reply: I won't stop writing as long a people are enjoying,. Thanks for reviewing. LBJ

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 28 on 12/10/2008
Oh gosh, wonder what Eomer is planning--but I'm thinking it will involve Lothy. I'm glad that she is now able to share her past with him--that's a major hurdle done already and their relationship is progressing very well.
Eomer "domestication" is starting in earnest too!

Author Reply: I am sure it will involve Lothy. He will find out all about her during the time ahead.

Thanks for reviewing.:LBJ

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 27 on 11/22/2008
A pleasing outing for the characters! It's good that Legolas was there. I enjoyed the interaction and all the sweetness between Eowyn and Faramir and of course Eomer and Lothiriel. It seemed to me that Lothy is quite ready to share her past with Eomer.

Author Reply: Glad you enjoyed it - they have to get to know each other a bit before I can marry them off!

Thanks for reviewing. LBJ.

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 27 on 11/22/2008
Well thankyou for the nice long chapter, it was good for a lazy afternoons reading. Lothirial and Eomer seem to be slowly getting to know each other but I think they have a lot to learn yet especially Eomer. Happy Thanksgiving Lady Bluejay! The Imp

Author Reply: Hope you had a lovely Thanksgiving - it's something we miss out on over this side of the Pond!

Glad you enjoyed - thanks for reviewing. LBJ

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 26 on 11/11/2008
I loved this chapter,so much going on in it, I kinda feel sorry for Eomer trying to visit with Lotherial and not being able too, but I guess all in good time, can't wait for the next chapter. The Imp

Author Reply: Can't give Eomer everything on a plate! Glad you are enjoying, and thanks for reviewing.LBJ

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