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| Jay's Drabblets II by Jay of Lasgalen | 184 Review(s) |
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| Kitty | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/8/2008 |
| Nice extension at the end! Ah yes, what is Ada's anger (or Erestor's) after surviving Gondolin? *grin* Author Reply: I think Elrond and Erestor are used to this sort of thing - especially when Glorfindel's behind it! | |
| Kitty | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/8/2008 |
| Oh yes, they are alive - though somehow I have the feeling they will need a certain balrog-slayer to protect them from Ada when he finds out *how* they did act out the fall of Gondolin *lol* Author Reply: Their parents are used to them acting out Glorfindel's stories! I've expanded the story a little now as well. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/7/2008 |
| And Nana and Ada are likely to wish to remove their heads! Ah, children's imaginations! Heh! Author Reply: Oh, yes - they're in trouble now! I've expanded the drabble now to include extra details. | |
| docmon | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/7/2008 |
Nice use of that closing line! Author Reply: And I suspect Ada is on the way now ... Thanks! The line could have been very angsty, but it seemed to fit in with the twins' games as well :>) | |
| Elflingimp | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/7/2008 |
| Well here I came thinking this was a serious story(Tee Hee!) I guess I was suprised! Elflings!!! LOL Hugs Deb the Imp Author Reply: Serious? With the summary about Glorfindel's bad influence? *Grin* I can do serious, but this line just leant itself to elfling games! | |
| Ellie | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/7/2008 |
| Oh my! What a mess the destruction of that city was! teehee They may have escaped alive, but for how long? Author Reply: *Grin* What will happen once Elrond or Erestor arrive? As usual, it's all Glorfindel's fault .. | |
| Ces | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/7/2008 |
| Oh Jay, this was too precious for words! How cute those two are as elflings and I'm sure the crashing of the "towers" coming down brought 'the enemy' running to them! Ces Author Reply: Oh, yes - I'm sure Elrond or Erestor will soon be on the scene! | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/18/2008 |
| This is very nice, sweet, but sad. You have to feel the sorrow they feel knowing they'll not see her for a long time. Nice touch Author Reply: I think they were probably aware that there was a chance they'd never see her again. The choice between mortality and immortality lay ahead for all of them. | |
| Kitty | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/5/2008 |
| Beautiful drabblet, Jay! It must have been terribly hard for them. Glad they didn't know then that at least Arwen would never sail ... Author Reply: Yes - if Celebrķan and Arwen had known it was their final parting, it would have been even sadder than it was. I firmly believe that Elladan and Elrohir were reunited with their mother, though! | |
| Neilia | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/29/2008 |
| *sniff, blowing nose for second time* I crumbled with Elrohir. Good write. Author Reply: I think he'd try to be strong for Celebrķan's sake - but he's not made of stone, and can't help showing his sense of grief and loss. Thank you! | |