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| To See A World by Nightwing | 776 Review(s) |
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| French Pony | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 1/8/2004 |
| Hello, 'tis me! Sorry I'm so late about sending you this. I've been kind of busy this last week or so, and I didn't want to shortshrift you on a review, so I waited until I had some time to sit and write something real, for I much enjoyed this chapter. Legolas sorely needed the alone time in the tree, and not just for the benefits of climbing. I think he needed to be away from Aragorn for a while, free of being taken care of. He has every right to some self-pity, but he doesn't seem to be the sort of person to mourn his loss when someone is around. And Aragorn is always around. It's funny; you don't think of sight as something to grieve over -- after all, if you are blinded by poison, at least you are still alive. But it is a loss, and a profound one at that, and I think people are always blindsided by how much they can grieve over something like that. And grieving is a process, it just drags on and on until it ends up in little fits and spurts. It's scary because it's beyond your control, but Elrond was very wise to point out that the only way out is through. And at the end, there is the realization that Legolas is still connected to the world, albeit in a changed way, which I'm sure is a great comfort to him. It's probably what brought his appetite back (a sure sign that something has begun to heal). And now we learn that Elves count echolocation among their talents. The kittycat continues to fascinate and delight. | |
| Theresa | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 1/4/2004 |
| This is a marvelous story. I hope you continue. Thank you for writing. | |
| Muinthel | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 1/4/2004 |
| ....It is just the right story I needed today to chear me up!!! Some parts reminded me strongly of "my oak" and the meetingpoint under the oak, which Legolas and his mother planted....:-)!!!! I like it, that you give Legolas again time to face his sorrow and also his anguish. That seams just so logical....how could he manage this new situation in such a short time, compared to his lifetime and his dependence on his sight. - "Pain cannot be skirted. When it comes to you, take the direct path and walk. Walk through it until you reach the other side." - that is so true!!!! It is wonderful how much wisdom and insight Legolas gets fom the tree. He memorises many things and sees the things he can be grateful for....and also reaches the other side of pain in some ways. And finally he can get rest again....finally he sleeps and gets new strength. The jump on the end is like he freed himself....that was excelent written!! And like always...I just adore the way you discribe their friendship!!! | |
| Fadesintothewest | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 1/3/2004 |
| Good luck with your new job! It was wonderful to read about LEgolas enjoying the song of all living things again. Hopefully this is a start for the emotional and spiritual recovery he needs. | |
| frodo16424 | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 1/2/2004 |
| Really enjoying your story. I like your characterization of Legolas and Aragorn. Both seem true to life, and very natural. Loved the idea of Aragorn knowing when to be there for his friend, and knowing when to let Legolas be on his own. Will be watching for updates. | |
| Muinthel | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/30/2003 |
| Hi....Nightwing! It's me from the old world....:-)! I found your message and tried to reach you....did you get my mail? Your newest chapter is just lovely and made me smile alot. I like the new name for the cat better...even though I grinned evily about the first!! I think you just hit the spot again, showing in few words the deep and depending relationship the two have.....well there is nothing like a real "men-friendship". | |
| Fadesintothewest | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/26/2003 |
| Crazy here with the holidays and family, but I had to sneak in cathing up with your story! As always, loveley, and I was so moved by Legolas'and the oak tree. Hope your muses cooperate! | |
| Shaan Lien | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/24/2003 |
| Absolutely wonderful, though I think I've already read it. I just realized that. Please post quickly, I eagerly await the next installment. I'm glad you didn't make Legolas incredibly prideful, that I find quite annoying. | |
| Lossenchristal | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/24/2003 |
| Hi, I just read your whole story. I love it! There seem to be a lot of Aragorn/Legolas stories going right now. Yours is one of the better ones. It is a little disturbing to have Legolas blind, but it IS a new twist that no one else had thought of yet. Please make him better soon though! I don't know how much more I can stand of him being so helpless!:( It is so sad! Keep it up! I can't wait for the next installment! Namarie! Lossenchristal | |
| LKK | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/24/2003 |
| I love Squeaky's Sindarin name. Congratulations to you and Ithilien for coming up with it. :-) I know that I've missed a couple of reviews for chapters. My apologies. It was circumstances in my world that kept me from writing. Nothing to do with the quality of your story or your writing. One of the things I love most about your story is your pacing. You let things that should take time take time, if that makes sense. For instance, after revealing that the orcs who killed Legolas' mother were nearby, many writers would have immediately sent the elf on a mission of revenge. But instead, you have held him back because he hasn't recovered properly. And that is how it should be. You're taking the time to allow both of them to adapt and adjust to their new circumstances. I appreciate that. Plus I like the small details you give to their daily life. Oh! And I loved Legolas' comment about how he always regarded Aragorn as unusual but suspected the he was "the Strange One" this time! :-) A wonderful chapter, Nightwing, preceeded by equally well done chapters that I should have also reviewed. LKK | |