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Poetic Arda  by Mirach 69 Review(s)
SiiwReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/22/2012
You have handled these prompts very well, and I have enjoyed reading all of them so far. The third one feels almost like a Viking poem.

Author Reply: Thank you very much! Yes, it should feel old, as it uses aliterative verse which was mostly used for the sagas.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/22/2012
Very creative response to the prompts. I like it!

Author Reply: Thank you again! =)

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/22/2012
That was masterful--both initial letters and rhyme, brought together with a most proper meter.

Author Reply: Thank you!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/22/2012
And we rejoice that Nahar's progeny remained in Middle Earth as the Lords of Horses! Beautiful poetry!

Author Reply: Thank you very much! It makes sense that the Mearas would have some Amanian blood in them, I think =)

EllynnReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/22/2012
Beautiful! And it must've been really difficult to write it... at least I imagine so. I mean, making a poem that can be read in three different ways, and each to make sense... I would never make it!

Author Reply: Thank you very much!

ellieReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/19/2012
Cool! I really like this one. well done!

Author Reply: Thank you!

CairistionaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/17/2012
Ooooh, beautiful! As in "lump-in-the-throat-as-I-read-it" beautiful.

Author Reply: Thank you very much, Cairistiona!

EllynnReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/17/2012
I am not a fan of poetry, but I really love this.

Author Reply: Thank you! =)

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/17/2012
The lords of horses, Mearas free and strong,
the steeds of kings that came out of a song.


Oooh, that gives me chills. A wonderful poem!

Author Reply: Thank you very much!

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