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Serving Gondor  by Larner 45 Review(s)
Walker-skyeReviewed Chapter: Author's Notes on 10/7/2017
I have stayed up way too late, enthralled by your story, and then touched by your notes. I'm a chaplain at an addictions treatment center, so the less than savory chracters in your tale ring, sadly, true. But so do those of honor! And justice was served! Your description of the cases before Aragorn held all the drama of a good courtroom show. A thoroughly enjoyable tale, that I hope leaves me with good dreams as I very belatedly head to bed! Thank you!

FreyalynReviewed Chapter: Author's Notes on 10/4/2017
Thank you for your extra words. I've really enjoyed this one.

TariReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/4/2017
Thank you for writing this birthday chapter. I have been reading all the chapters and enjoying them thoroughly.

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/3/2017
Being introduced to the monument of the hobbits and their deeds by Aragorn himself is a rare treat indeed.

And that those lords who were ignorant of the needs of their people had to pay for the charity meals is perfect justice.

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/30/2017
It seems I have completely missed the start of a very good story ;-)

I am very impressed of the level of charity and the condition of for example the Rest House. But of course, we do not speak of any king and queen, we speak of Aragorn and Arwen!

So I hope that Andred, after a very good meal, will find a suitable job in Minas Anor.

FreyalynReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 9/28/2017
Lovely story. I've enjoyed every word. Thank you for sharing it with us.

AntaneReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 9/27/2017
Love this ending and when the trees start to bloom and end and that the four hobbits are together at this moment, no matter how much distance physically separates them, they are together. Yea!

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

MattReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 9/27/2017
This, overall, is a very nice story. Outcomes are implied (aka the decision for your seamstress to stay in Minas Anor) which is unfortunate but understandable. Often your OCs are the best part of your stories and I'd encourage you to focus on them as much as you can in future work. Thanks loads for your hard work on this, looking forward to seeing what you do next.

KathyGReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 9/27/2017
I love this ending! I think that Andred and her mother and friends should join them under that tree before returning to the Second Circle.

UTfrogReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 9/27/2017
Lovely story. The epilogue was magnificent. Thank you so much.

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