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| Serving Gondor by Larner | 46 Review(s) |
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| Andrea | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/7/2017 |
| Many mothers seek to clothe their smallest children as they imagine the Pheriannath dress when they are in their own land. Very nice. I like that idea, and very good for Andred and Gilriel as well! I hope that the hearing will be of more success than the one of Norien. That man is really a criminal. P.S.: My birthday is in April, too. So thank you very much for this chapter. | |
| Walker-skye | Reviewed Chapter: Author's Notes on 10/7/2017 |
| I have stayed up way too late, enthralled by your story, and then touched by your notes. I'm a chaplain at an addictions treatment center, so the less than savory chracters in your tale ring, sadly, true. But so do those of honor! And justice was served! Your description of the cases before Aragorn held all the drama of a good courtroom show. A thoroughly enjoyable tale, that I hope leaves me with good dreams as I very belatedly head to bed! Thank you! | |
| Freyalyn | Reviewed Chapter: Author's Notes on 10/4/2017 |
| Thank you for your extra words. I've really enjoyed this one. | |
| Tari | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/4/2017 |
| Thank you for writing this birthday chapter. I have been reading all the chapters and enjoying them thoroughly. | |
| Andrea | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/3/2017 |
| Being introduced to the monument of the hobbits and their deeds by Aragorn himself is a rare treat indeed. And that those lords who were ignorant of the needs of their people had to pay for the charity meals is perfect justice. | |
| Andrea | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/30/2017 |
| It seems I have completely missed the start of a very good story ;-) I am very impressed of the level of charity and the condition of for example the Rest House. But of course, we do not speak of any king and queen, we speak of Aragorn and Arwen! So I hope that Andred, after a very good meal, will find a suitable job in Minas Anor. | |
| Freyalyn | Reviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 9/28/2017 |
| Lovely story. I've enjoyed every word. Thank you for sharing it with us. | |
| Antane | Reviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 9/27/2017 |
| Love this ending and when the trees start to bloom and end and that the four hobbits are together at this moment, no matter how much distance physically separates them, they are together. Yea! Namarie, God bless, Antane :) | |
| Matt | Reviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 9/27/2017 |
| This, overall, is a very nice story. Outcomes are implied (aka the decision for your seamstress to stay in Minas Anor) which is unfortunate but understandable. Often your OCs are the best part of your stories and I'd encourage you to focus on them as much as you can in future work. Thanks loads for your hard work on this, looking forward to seeing what you do next. | |
| KathyG | Reviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 9/27/2017 |
| I love this ending! I think that Andred and her mother and friends should join them under that tree before returning to the Second Circle. | |