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Flight of the Dunedain  by Halrohir Haladanion 15 Review(s)
Sue CookeReviewed Chapter: 16 on 1/20/2018
MORE MORE MORE more more m o r e m o r e zzzzzzsnurf

MattReviewed Chapter: 16 on 1/19/2018
Really nice chapter. Like the increased length a lot. Curious to see what happens next. Thanks for your hard work on this.

MattReviewed Chapter: 15 on 1/15/2018
Nice job on this chapter. I like the greater length and also the sense of .... something wicked this way comes that it carries with it. A nice cliffhanger. Looking forward to future installments.

AranadhelReviewed Chapter: 15 on 1/14/2018
Le hannon!

I couldn't believe it when say the title and I knew that the Elves of Rivendell will be in this chapter!

Yeah to Calembeg the Noldo and I'm assuming Dorwin is a Sinda or Silvan elf since he has golden hair and speaks not the Common Tongue :P

Can't wait for more Elves!




Namarie

Sue CookeReviewed Chapter: 14 on 1/13/2018
Oooo...spooky. Halrohir is a nascent hero. I hope he comes to no harm. You have completely hooked me with this story. I check every day for a new chapter and I have not been disappointed yet!

Author Reply: Thank you so much for the review!

Next chapter, coming right up!

MattReviewed Chapter: 13 on 1/12/2018
Two more great chapters. Liked the scouting procedures and also the ongoing conversation about how and when to proceed. Looking forward to future installments and thankful for your hard work on these.

Author Reply: Thank you again for the review!

There are more suspense and action scenes coming...

AranadhelReviewed Chapter: 12 on 1/11/2018
I can't wait to see the Rivendell Elves come to the rescue!

Cue the Elven horn!

Author Reply: Thank you for the review!

Tiro i dartho, mellon nin...

Sue CookeReviewed Chapter: 11 on 1/10/2018
Oooo, what a gripping story! You write so well - I feel like I'm part of the caravan. Can't wait for more chapters. Oh, and the black horse is magnificent. I just know he is going to do something very important now that he is 'bonded' with Halrohir. Thank you

Author Reply: Thank you so much for the review!

Halrohir and Morindal have been works of mine for quite some time, and they've been refined over the years of writing. But to go back to their origin stories is a challenge and a treat.

MattReviewed Chapter: 11 on 1/10/2018
I like these last four chapters though the first two most due to greater length. Excellent action descriptions there and your characters continue to grow well. Still encouraging a change in author name as this looks like an SI which may get you in trouble this site. Thanks loads for your hard work on this, curious to see what happens next.

AranadhelReviewed Chapter: 9 on 1/9/2018
I'm holding my breath for a few Noldor warriors to emerge from Imladris and rescue the Dunedain!

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