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Flight of the Dunedain  by Halrohir Haladanion 21 Review(s)
Sue CookeReviewed Chapter: 14 on 1/13/2018
Oooo...spooky. Halrohir is a nascent hero. I hope he comes to no harm. You have completely hooked me with this story. I check every day for a new chapter and I have not been disappointed yet!

Author Reply: Thank you so much for the review!

Next chapter, coming right up!

MattReviewed Chapter: 13 on 1/12/2018
Two more great chapters. Liked the scouting procedures and also the ongoing conversation about how and when to proceed. Looking forward to future installments and thankful for your hard work on these.

Author Reply: Thank you again for the review!

There are more suspense and action scenes coming...

AranadhelReviewed Chapter: 12 on 1/11/2018
I can't wait to see the Rivendell Elves come to the rescue!

Cue the Elven horn!

Author Reply: Thank you for the review!

Tiro i dartho, mellon nin...

Sue CookeReviewed Chapter: 11 on 1/10/2018
Oooo, what a gripping story! You write so well - I feel like I'm part of the caravan. Can't wait for more chapters. Oh, and the black horse is magnificent. I just know he is going to do something very important now that he is 'bonded' with Halrohir. Thank you

Author Reply: Thank you so much for the review!

Halrohir and Morindal have been works of mine for quite some time, and they've been refined over the years of writing. But to go back to their origin stories is a challenge and a treat.

MattReviewed Chapter: 11 on 1/10/2018
I like these last four chapters though the first two most due to greater length. Excellent action descriptions there and your characters continue to grow well. Still encouraging a change in author name as this looks like an SI which may get you in trouble this site. Thanks loads for your hard work on this, curious to see what happens next.

AranadhelReviewed Chapter: 9 on 1/9/2018
I'm holding my breath for a few Noldor warriors to emerge from Imladris and rescue the Dunedain!

MattReviewed Chapter: 7 on 1/7/2018
Interesting chapter. The manipulations are well worth reading. One thought, I would try to lengthen your chapters a bit even if this slows posting. Thanks for your hard work on this, looking forward to future installments.

Author Reply: Thank you so much for the reply!

I have been watching the sizes of my entries; this last one was going to be so massive, I elected to chop it into two smaller ones. I hope the next installment catches your mind's eye!

MattReviewed Chapter: 6 on 1/6/2018
Nice job on this chapter. I tend toward the thought to take an extra day for rest but see both sides of the argument. Thanks for your hard work on this, looking forward to the next installment.

Author Reply: Thank you so much for the review!

Many things are about to happen at once, so stay tuned!

AranadhelReviewed Chapter: 6 on 1/6/2018
Well written.

Please, I hope to see a few Rivendell Elves soon of your creation to meet the Dunedain.

Le hannon.

Happy New Year!

Author Reply: Thank you so much for the reply!

Spoilers... ;)

KathReviewed Chapter: 6 on 1/6/2018
Really enjoying this new story. You have chosen an interesting idea, looking at the fate of the Rangers families when the main force left to aid Aragorn.
Liking your young Ranger hero and look forward to the developing relationship between him and Blackfoot.

Author Reply: Thank you for the review!

I thought of this line of pondering years ago, but it fell away and I never pursued it, until the story was recovered. Now, at last, I can share it with all!

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