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Flight of the Dunedain  by Halrohir Haladanion 15 Review(s)
MattReviewed Chapter: 7 on 1/7/2018
Interesting chapter. The manipulations are well worth reading. One thought, I would try to lengthen your chapters a bit even if this slows posting. Thanks for your hard work on this, looking forward to future installments.

Author Reply: Thank you so much for the reply!

I have been watching the sizes of my entries; this last one was going to be so massive, I elected to chop it into two smaller ones. I hope the next installment catches your mind's eye!

MattReviewed Chapter: 6 on 1/6/2018
Nice job on this chapter. I tend toward the thought to take an extra day for rest but see both sides of the argument. Thanks for your hard work on this, looking forward to the next installment.

Author Reply: Thank you so much for the review!

Many things are about to happen at once, so stay tuned!

AranadhelReviewed Chapter: 6 on 1/6/2018
Well written.

Please, I hope to see a few Rivendell Elves soon of your creation to meet the Dunedain.

Le hannon.

Happy New Year!

Author Reply: Thank you so much for the reply!

Spoilers... ;)

KathReviewed Chapter: 6 on 1/6/2018
Really enjoying this new story. You have chosen an interesting idea, looking at the fate of the Rangers families when the main force left to aid Aragorn.
Liking your young Ranger hero and look forward to the developing relationship between him and Blackfoot.

Author Reply: Thank you for the review!

I thought of this line of pondering years ago, but it fell away and I never pursued it, until the story was recovered. Now, at last, I can share it with all!

MattReviewed Chapter: 5 on 1/5/2018
An interesting story. I would encourage posting individual chapters once a day rather than in a bunch like this. It may encourage higher readership. The fact that your authorial name and the name of the lead character is the same verges dangerously on SI-ship which may also be an issue as this particular site resists such works. Still, a very well written tale with a lot of excellent character development so far and a nice, steady plot with a lot of potential. Looking forward to future installments and thankful for your hard work on these so far.

Author Reply: Thank you for the review!

First, I plead this excuse: having lost my original screen nickname, I re-signed up under my current name, thinking that all my former work was lost. But when I discovered that a friend had archived it all, I was so enthusiastic that I put forth what I had. No intent at SI-ship was meant.

I hope you continue to enjoy the tale, and more tales to come, because I have so much to tell!

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