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| Darkness is more than the absence of light by Laikwalâssê | 22 Review(s) |
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| mystarlight | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 11/22/2019 |
| The new character appears!!! The whole situation makes me think why do townspeople not believe Elves? Author Reply: something from the past obviously - but Elrond has other Problems Right now, or not? | |
| mystarlight | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/31/2019 |
| Love Erestor. Author Reply: I´m too. LOL! Lai | |
| demeter d | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 10/27/2019 |
| "My revenge on this damned elf Elrond is within reach". OH MY! A classic Laikwalasse cliff-hanger! You do not hear very often of anyone who does not like Elrond. He seems to have spent his life giving refuge and healing to all who came to his valley. Oh... I wonder... What if someone the "judge" cared about came to the valley too ill or injured for even Elrond to help? Every doctor who ever lived loses some patients. Hmmm. I will be watching anxiously for next chapter. Author Reply: Hi demeter d, your guess is not far from the mark but this man is very Evil. I´m sure Elrond has not only friends abroad. I´m very glad for your review. Thanks. Lai | |
| sue | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/21/2019 |
| Ooooo a cliff-hangar! I am so enjoying this story. I like seeing elf/human interaction even if the humans are - shall we say - savages. I check every day for a new chapter. Thanks Author Reply: Thank you so much for your review. I‘m glad you like my story. Interacting of elves and men are so exciting. Next chapter will be up soon. Lai | |
| mystarlight | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/18/2019 |
| Great entrance of Erestor. As I see Elrond finally lost his patience. At last!!! He was really patient after so brutal attack for Arwen. Author Reply: Hopefully Erestor can help. It‘s high time indeed. Elrond needs assistance. Thanks for reviewing. Lai | |
| demeter d | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/15/2019 |
| Wow! My hobbit-sized Grandmother, and her son, my father, both in their time worked as newspaper reporters. Their working philosophy was always "walk right into a situation as if you belong there, and people are less likely to question you!" An imposing looking figure rides right up to the judge and DEMANDS to know what is going on. I would imagine it will take a beat or two before anyone protests. I remember the description of how Frodo sees Glorfindel displaying his power against the Ringwraiths at the Fords of Bruinen. If Erestor has any similar sort of Elf-Lord power, this next chapter could be good! I have recently been re-reading Fiondil's "Elf Academy 3" story. If this were one of HIS tales, I might expect a Maia or Lord Namo to appear to back Erestor up! But even without that sort of help, I think your Erestor is ready to make something happen. I will be anxiously waiting! Author Reply: wow, thank you for the amazing review. I hope I can fulfill your hopes but don´t forget the elves are in the world of men and have to bow to their justice. I fear Erestor will be as hindered as Elrond in not wanting to risk Elladan´s life. But don´t worry another elf will make an appearance and not heed caution. Hope you enjoy further. Lai | |
| mystarlight | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/10/2019 |
| Can't wait for Erestor taking matters in his hands!!! Author Reply: Erestor to the front, yes! Thanks for reviewing. Lai | |
| mystarlight | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 9/30/2019 |
| Can't wait to find out who appears. Erestor? Author Reply: you are right! Who other can help? See you next chapter. Thanks for reviewing. Lai | |
| mystarlight | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/23/2019 |
| Another cliffhanger!!! I was on the edge of my seat reading this chapter and now another week of waiting! Hope Arwen will survive this attack. Author Reply: glad the Story can excite you that much. You know what happens when elves are forced? But is Arwen´s dad not the best healer in Middle earth? See you next week. Thank you so much for the review. Lai | |
| mystarlight | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/15/2019 |
| Amazing cliffhanger. Poor Arwen. Can't wait for another chapter. Author Reply: thank you and yes, the girl is not to be envied. The next chapter will come Monday. Thank you for reviewing. Lai | |