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| Two By Two by Jay of Lasgalen | 52 Review(s) |
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| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/15/2004 |
| I sympathize with Celebrian's comment that the babies would be more trouble once they were born. Boy, is that the truth! I know you're not going to kill Elrohir, Jay, but how are you going to save him? Author Reply: You'll have to wait and see - I'm frantically writing the next chapter, because I can't bear to leave them all like that! | |
| Elendiari22 | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/15/2004 |
| Oh, dear! Bring on the next chapter! Author Reply: Soon, I promise. Soon. | |
| Bodldops | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/15/2004 |
| Aiee! That was not nice. Now you've got my Elrohir!muse beating up on me... I know this never helps, but please update soon. I love how you write the interaction between Elrond and Celebrian. I did wonder, however, why Glorfindel and Erestor could not hear that there were two melodies, not just one... Author Reply: Whoops! You caught me out there - umm ... maybe they were just not listening as carefully as Elrond and Celebrian? They are males, after all, and aren't so interested in babies! | |
| Yuna_Dax | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/15/2004 |
| EEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKK!! The story itself is beautifully told, but the angst is heartstopping. There have been numererous fics relating to the birth of the twins, and not one of them has the heartfelt angst and turmoil of yours. It was just assumed that the birth had no complications and I'm appreciating the twist of events! :) Author Reply: You know how I love angst, especially twin angst! So I started as I mean to go on. Poor Elrohir! | |
| Elvenesse | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/15/2004 |
| Well you've certainly got rid of the fluff. I know that both twins turn out okay, as they ride with Aragorn in RotK (unless you're being particularly nasty and tricking people into believing this follows canon when it's really an AU). I liked the idea of the mithril bracelets, a very nice way of making sure they can name them and tell them apart (much nicer than the horrible plastic id bracelets used in hospitals). I was re-reading chapter one and thought this was a nice sentence, and very true! She smiled, an unbelievably sweet, joyous smile. “Aye. Twins. Two sons. Our sons. My love, I think our lives will never be the same again!” Author Reply: No, it's not AU. You'll just have to wait and see how things resolve! The mithril bracelets are indeed the Middle Earth equivalent of hospital bracelets (and also based on a silver Christening bracelet I had as a baby). | |
| Amlee | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/29/2004 |
| Ok you need to update this!!!! I want more! | |
| Ren | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/27/2003 |
| This is very nice!! continue this, please. | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/25/2003 |
| I enjoyed the loving relationship you showed between these two. And Elrond's comment that their life would never be the same? He has no idea. Having one child changed my more than anything else that ever happened to me. I cannot imagine what twins would be like, especially since Elrond was one too. | |
| LKK | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/24/2003 |
| My love, I think our lives will never be the same again! LOL! The very essence of understatement, Jay. I'm delighted that you've started another story involving the Twins. I love your interpretation of them. I'll be watching my story notifications closely, looking for updates on this one. :-) LKK | |
| Nilmandra | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/23/2003 |
| LOL - and from all we know (ok, perhaps imagine) about the twins, practice surely did make perfect :D | |